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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2019 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

The shaving scene reminds me of a similar scene in the movie "The nephew". Very sensual and moving. It was not the beard, but the hair/dreadlocks of a young American visiting Ireland.

Back to Pittsburgh: it's the scene that every reader was waiting for and Justin did it perfectly!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

You just had to have the rest of the journal obliterated... didn't cha?

Well, is this where knowledge will be unleashed at the Duquesne Club?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2019 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

Who would have thought  that shaving could be so sexy?  I have to admit I want to know what happened to Billy too.



Author's Response:

Oh, yeah! That shaving scene was planned long ago and we meant the sexiness. Glad you approved. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2019 1:29 am Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

Wonderful update and the pictures were perfect.  As always amazing writing.  Loved the shaving scene.  Could see it so clearly in my mind. Happy 4th of July to both of you.



Author's Response:

Yay! The fact you can see it as you read it means we have succeeded as writers! Glad you enjoyed it! TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2019 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

Perhaps the beard-shaving was inspired by recent real-life events??? ;-)

I'm with Justin, I hate abandoned WIPs, LOL!



Author's Response:

Lololol! I promise - all my WIPs will eventually be finished! Pinky swear! TAG

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2019 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

Loved the shaving scene. There emirged the face of g-g Justin loves so.

As for what happened to Billy after Emma's suicide, I want to know too.



Author's Response:

We’re working on that! Promise. TAG

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2019 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Uncover

I loved the whole chapter and the especially the shaving scene ❤️ It was so timely with the pictures currently out of Gale looking clean shaven and with a haircut. My oh my he is still a handsome man as is our Eggy. Dam I wanted to hear the end of Billy and Jay as well



Author's Response:

Happy you liked it. That shaving scene has been on my mind from the very beginning. And don't fret about not finding out the end of Billy's story just yet... TAG

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