Date: Nov 13, 2018 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Daphne and Justin are too funny! Their discussion about the name of the mystery: epic.
MM is more and more easy to be with. Will he say something about Ian?
Author's Response:
We adore Justin and Daphne and are so glad everyone else seems to as well. They are just so easy to write. Their argument about the mystery topic just seemed SO them, you know?
MM is definitely warming up to Justin, you'll find out soon enough if Ian gets a mention or not :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing as always.
~TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 13, 2018 9:28 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Yes, your chapter definitely provided sweetness. Our Mystery Man is certainly looking forward to his burglars' visits. I loved how he found a way for Justin to come back, even though I have no doubt Justin would have thought of a reason to show up again. It was sweet of Harry to arrive downstairs to greet him. How long before Harry actually greets him at the door? And I really doubt those little coffee creamers will make the resident guard 'fat'.
So Harry does own the building. That answers one of my questions. But he needs to realize the difference between Burglar vs Trespasser. But now that Justin's been invited back, he won't even be a trespasser anymore, right?
I was almost hoping Harry would show up outside and chase Ehan away, but I know that's impossible at this point. I'm sure Harry will have questions for Justin about Ethan though. Maybe Harry can offer some advice.
I do have a couple questions. Something I need to point out. You said, “Don’t be. You didn’t even know him,” Brian replied. Okay, How do we know this is Brian speaking?
Then you said, Come on. I’ll make sure you to the bus safely. Shouldn't the word 'get' be in there?
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the double posting. I'm proud of you ladies. In a mere week you've put out over 25K words. Just keep writing, and I'll be sure to keep reading!
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy,
Firstly, thanks for being our eyes for us, sometimes we end up reading, editing and posting so late, we miss things - like the little B slip up - but that is fixed now, phew :) Thanks for all your support, it's reviews like yours that keep us going.
~ TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 13, 2018 4:05 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
It's funny, but as I was reading this chapter, I said to myself, Tag & Sally are not writing this story. Egbert and Brat are sending the thoughts to you. And, you are putting their thoughts on paper perfectly. There is just something so unique about this story. Whatever it is, keep it going as it is wonderful.
Date: Nov 13, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Something tells me Egert might be a little jealous if he spotted that Ethan encounter from the window!
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2018 2:05 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Things were going smoothingly until Ethan showed up. Your line is lovely but I agree with Daphne.