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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 3:16 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

I'm lost: at the beginning of the chapter, Luther is with Zaden in the Brohouse and at the end, he is in the Ward C of the prison's hospital.

Is Jones really dead or is it a trick to get Michael to confess and drop the act?



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Yes Luther was with Zaden at first but then he had to go back to the hospital in order trick Michael into returning as well.

Yes Jones is dead. Michael really did kick him to death imagining he was Justin.

Hope that clarifies things for you.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:36 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

I love your stories but NO, Luther does not get turned into a good guy, he's done way too much to even think he gets forgiveness, please no.  

You can write him as a good guy but he will always be a BAD guy in my book.  

Michael has to be one of the stupidiest people in the world.  He is such a sleeze, and never sees himself as the idiot and moron he is.  

bec

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 1:59 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

As NYC has no death penalty, When will Michael get his comuppance?

He's already serving 50 yrs, so life for the murder won't be much difference.

As murder is a violent offence, can he pls be tranferred to a really nasty maximum security prison and get the shit kicked/raped out of him there, as soon as he opens his stupid mouth?

Still loving your work,

Deb.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 1:59 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

As NYC has no death penalty, When will Michael get his comuppance?

He's already serving 50 yrs, so life for the murder won't be much difference.

As murder is a violent offence, can he pls be tranferred to a really nasty maximum security prison and get the shit kicked/raped out of him there, as soon as he opens his stupid mouth?

Still loving your work,

Deb.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 10:31 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

Oh this was good.  Love when Mikey gets what he deserves.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:38 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

Luther and Zee were able to talk and it cleared up some things but they still have more to overcome if he wants forgiveness for the He'll he put his family through simply because he is grieving the loss of his son.

Michael is so stupid that he couldn't tell he aS walking into a trap and now he may just die in prison.

Wonder what plan they have for Lindsay?

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 3:57 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

Woah.  Jones is dead?  I'm confused is Luther turning into a good guy or still a bad guy?

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 1:16 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

Please don't make us wait too long before an update!!!

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 9:58 am Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire

For once Luther did right. Being a grandfather gave him some sense. Micheal was easy to be trapped. Both idiots are wrong for thinking having any upper hand on Brian,Justin, Zee,Faal & their family. still felt storms are brewing...as there are others.

Excited for more. Wonderful chapter. Thankyou for update. :)❤

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