[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2019 11:43 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Wow, wasn't expecting that, but it is perfect. Never was a favorite character of mine. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 9:44 am Title: Speaking...Part 4
WOW! Just WOW!
I have been waiting for one of my fave authors to kill Michael for ages! Kudos to you!
This was great, although it would be better if he suffered a bit instead of dying instantly. LOL.
Do we get an account of someone who actually saw it (maybe B/J), rather than a second hand account? Also poor Deb.
Thanks for great chapter,
Deb L.
Date: Sep 27, 2019 3:38 am Title: Speaking...Part 4
Oh. My. God.
I'm not too shocked in fanfiction any longer, but that shocked me big time.
I can just picture Uncle Vic sitting in front of sparlking pearly gates, just sitting and waiting there as Michael arrives up top, I can see it so clearly. Michael steps out of the elevator that seems to be hanging in the air among the clouds.
Vic grimaces: Michael what the hell happened to you?
Michael: Nothing, it was that fat asses fault, he did this to me. But I get the last laugh because at least I'm in Heaven and he still is having to trudge along down there.
Vic shook his head back and forth.
Vic: You're not gettig into Heaven, this is just the Pearly Gates, this is where you will be Judged and then sent on to where you have to spend eternity. And from what I heard no one who has killed in anger has ever made it passed these gates
Michael smiles: God will understand that I did everything for love, for my love of Brian, you'll see. God knows all and sees all, he'll know and understand.
Loud Voice: Michael Charles Novotny you have been judged and it has been found that you will spend eternity in HELL!!
Michael starts to sputter and yell: No, you can't be serious, God knows why I did everything, God has to see I did it for love!!
Loud Voice: It has been determined that you do not love, you covet, you obsess, you hate. Again HELL!!
Michael started to sputter but no one knew what he had to say he suddenly flew back into the elevator he just came out of, the door closed and it dropped at an amazing rate of speed.
Vic shook his head back and forth and turned to head back through the glittering, sparkly gates
"You never understood what love was Michael, never."
The End, lol
Can't wait to see what you have in store for Vampira, what ever it is she deserves it.
Thank you for sharing your words with us.
bec
Author's Response:
Dear Bec, thank you so much for the review and the kind words. And more importantly thank you for saying yes to me! I hope you like what I've done with it!
Happy reading!
Nicole (MissMerlot)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 1:47 am Title: Speaking...Part 4
So Michael bought the bullet? Wow.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 8:33 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Whoa, that's unexpected! The death row "residents" should be so lucky: they are avoiding a serious noisy cohabitation.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 7:29 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Micheal was over his head. He got Justice, he deserved. Will Lindsay back down? whatever Vance & her is brewing in their delusions for revenge. A waiting game now.
Immpresive written. Curious to read More. ThankYou for the updates. :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 6:16 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Holy ShitBalls!!!
They Are All Finally Free of one Michael Charles Novotny!
May he enjoy roasting in Hell cause Heaven wouldn't have him on a bet.
Next to pay are Lindsay and Vance.I
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 5:10 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Woah!!! Amazing chapter! Michael finally got what he deserved. Will Lindsay be next? You really know how to keep us on the edge of our seats!
Love the conversation between Hunter and Deb, too. He probably felt a bit unsure of her reaction, but she was Grandma all the way.
Hope to start reviewing more. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Deb