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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2019 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is going to require a lot of planning.  Hope it works out.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2019 2:03 am Title: Chapter 3

Great update, wonderful writing, but I do not like Evan.  He ranks up there with Mikey on my least favorite people list, but I guess he will make a good storyline as long as my happy ending will eventually come.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2019 11:51 am Title: Chapter 2

Interesting, same character but different story line.  Last story Justin knew Evan.  Liking this and wondering how the three of them manage to work together.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2019 4:48 am Title: Chapter 2

Well now they are in the same place, but can't be with each other.  Is Evan a scam artists like Eric ?

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2019 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hmmmm.....why do I get the feeling that Evan tricked Brian into getting married. Something about why he showed up at Kinnetik in the first place doesn’t seem quite right.

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2019 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, I really, really dislike Evan, but I know he will make the story interesting.  Terrific writing.  Can't wait to see where you go with this!  

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah....I can’t with this one. Just the thought of Brian being with Evan in any way is too much for me. I’m not keen on Evan at all, I don’t think that will change for me.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 2:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh this should be fun.  I hope Justin says no and come back to his true love Brian.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I want to know who was behind this.  No one just misses a red reject notice.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for the ps because I already have a very, very strong dislike for Evan.  You know happy endings are my thing so I have faith in you.  As for the story, I am totally hooked after just one chapter.  Please don't let it become an unfinished story.  There are so many right now that my head spins.  I understand RL and all, but some of these writers were ones that never left their stories and now it is weeks without updates.  I actually only started reading completed stories a few months ago, but I do have faith in you to complete this one.  Hope all is well with you.



Author's Response:

Glad I got you hooked!

I hope to be able to update at least once per week, but it will depend on how fast I write and my betas. I've got quite a few chapters already written, so it shouldn't be trouble.

I don't like stories left unfinished, and I always do my very best to finish mine.

Thank you for your feedback!

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