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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 11:43 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

Still say it's Michael. He must have said something to Brian about not wanting to be a father and pissed Brian off so badly Brian refuses to talk to or see him.

Glad Justin stood up to Hobb's bullying.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

Ahh, sorry, I'm not NEARLY as confused as I was in the last chapter. This kind of cleared up that confusion. But, shortly before Daphne pointed out that Justin was seeing through someone else's eyes, that thought entered my mind.

I have two people in mind for who Justin is channeling. And I think it's because he has a connection with Brian that he's seeing Gus and feeling the hostility.

Brian noticing him, and asking, “What are YOU doing here?” makes me go back to what I have commented on a couple of times already... I think on some level Brian's aware of Justin's emphatic ability and it's why no matter what Justin tried, Brian ignored him at every turn.

I see you have a new banner. I, personally, like the other one better. One reason is that this one depicts a twenty-two-year-old Justin instead of seventeen, and a five-year-old Gus, instead of a baby.

Looking forward to more.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

 

Yep, confused would be the best adjective!

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 9:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

Yes confused very confused chapter very successful.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 3:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

Nope it's not Brian.  I think I know who and why but I don't want to spoil the fun.



Author's Response:

You don't think Brian hates and wants to kill Gus? Really? LOL... TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 1:48 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

OK, so I had originally posted my thoughts on what the hell was going on... but after some thought, I figured it was probably better to keep my guesses to myself... so as not to ruin anything in the off-chance I was correct. Much more fun to let the wonderful words reveal their secrets in due time.

So very happy to see the update though! Don't know if I can be as patient waiting for the next installment, LOL!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 1:19 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.

Totally confused, but starting to get some ideas I will keep to myself.  I have to see how I do.  As usual, Tag, the writing is amazing.  I don't know how you do it, but, you do it well.  

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