[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2019 3:14 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
There has got to be some way to identify the kidnappers. They now know there is more than one. But who?
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2019 2:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
Wonderful update. I am totally baffled by who it is this time. Great suspense. Fantastic writing as always. Will keep you in my thoughts and prayers that things go well for you. Hang in there.
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2019 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 10 - You Just Needed To Relax
Justin felt - unrelaxed. I'm sure his heart was racing, his palms were sweaty, and his temperature was raised. Come on... Brian Kinney just undressed him, undressed himself and crawled on the bed, nipping his way up Justin's body... Yeah... unrelaxed.
The Church. The Church. Will they make it on time. Is that Joanie's church too? Deb's church. Joanie's church. Claire. Michael.
The plot thickens ... time is of the essence.
All I can think is Brian and Justin connected on a deep level when having sex... so that connected Brian and Justin and he was able to see Justin's vision. At least Brian knows now... Justin is the real thing.
A little sci-fi in your mystery now. I wonder if I read or watch too much TV???
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Nov 21, 2019 1:42 am Title: Chapter 10 - You Just Needed To Relax
Thank you - and Brian - for relaxing Justin!
Hmmm... the clues in this one are definitely pointing in a very specific direction.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2019 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 10 - You Just Needed To Relax
Well done!!! What a great way of relaxing with some expected results and some non expected. I hope they will find Gus quickly as the wacko is starting to be physically dangerous.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2019 9:11 am Title: Chapter 10 - You Just Needed To Relax
t's so breathless and exciting. I hope the church is a good track to find Gus.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2019 2:31 am Title: Chapter 10 - You Just Needed To Relax
At least they have a clue as to where the Gus is. Interesting that Brian was able to hone in on Justin's connection.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2019 1:48 am Title: Chapter 10 - You Just Needed To Relax
Great update as always. Oh this is getting better and better. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2019 7:07 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
Is Justin being blocked from being too close to Brian? Just a thought I had. Anyways...
I loved the Pink Panther reference. at least you didn't use Detective Drebin.
which was only up to mid-January - you ALWAYS manage to get the comedy thrown in in stressful situations. Too bad Brian didn't have Justin's stats typed in.
Well, we KNOW Vic is innocent, but if Brian is going to list clients and tricks, you would CERTAINLY think he'd list his own family. I mean, who hates him more? But, I did like how Kip's name was thrown in there, too.
As far as sex, I'd rather have drama and plot, with a little sex thrown in. You will get there, I have no fear. hehe
Sorry about your RL lately, and whenever you can get around to your NaNoWriMo story, we will all reap the benefits.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2019 5:59 am Title: Chapter 8 - Reading People
Did you throw Michael's money woes in there as a deterrent? If that was the case, Michael shouldn't have been so contrite when he found out about the kidnapping and Brian'slack of available funds.
But, Justin's empath skills read Michael - spot on. And my question has ALWAYS been, just what kind of best friend are you, Michael Novotny? jealousy and envy ... get your attention. It would also give Michael an opportunity to have Brian depend and lean on him. But, if it's Michael, who is with Gus?
I love the fact that even with everything Brian is going through, you still have him true to form. He's still skeptic, he's still snarky, and he even worked in talking about sex. Classic Kinney.
On to the next chapter.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Nov 11, 2019 12:53 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
I go away for a week... and I have TWO chapters waiting for me when I get back! I should go away more often, LOL! Hopefully, your RL Adulting will calm down soon.
I still think the bad guy is a bad gal. And Brian didn't list any family members on his spreadsheet. Hmmm...
Date: Nov 06, 2019 10:59 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2019 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
I assumed it was Mikey having those thoughts all along, However, after this chapter and knowing how sneaky you are, I think he may be a red herring! Which really doesn't leave anyone. Hmmm, will have to think more on this!
Thanks
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2019 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
Great idea to compare the lists; the one from Brian with the tricks was hilarious. They have a least 2 potential culprits; that's a good start for the cops. Will Brian be OK to let Carl know about Michael?
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2019 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Reading People
So happy to find 2 new chapters!
Brian's alibi is quite funny! Mel is as mean as ever and Michael, if not guilty, is almost believable. Is he drowning in bills from Vic and Debbie or is it for some precious collectibles?
I loved how Brian was teasing Justin about his addiction and his hope to get back in Brian's bed.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2019 8:58 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
Everything seems to blame Michael. Justin has good visions. Let's wait to see where you will take us.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2019 4:43 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
Great chapter. Michael seems too obvious,but usually that is the one person who ends up guilty.. You are good at keeping us guessing so we will wait it out. And, eventually they will end up in bed. It is inevitable. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2019 1:56 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.
Hasssss to ne Mikey !
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2019 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Reading People
Mikey fits all the criteria, but wouldn't Justin have recognized if it were him?
Author's Response:
Remember, Justin has never seen the kidnapper's face - he sees through the other's eyes - so no, he wouldn't recognize if it had been Michael... (I'm being very tricky here, huh?) LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2019 12:22 am Title: Chapter 8 - Reading People
Great chapter, as always. Adulting is tough. Had to do that today and I am still not over it. We appreciate any writing that you do and will wait patiently for updates. Take care of yourself and don't let RL get you down.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I HATE Adulting. :( TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2019 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Reading People
Eagerly waiting on the next chapter. Loving this. Great writing.
Author's Response:
Lucky you, cuz I got a lot of writing done last weekend and the next chapter is almost ready too. Hoorah! TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2019 4:58 am Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
So, Hooked up on this mystery. Glad Brian listened. Justin hopefully will derive more info about one of the culprits.
"He's with Me." It doesn't matter what Mel or other think about Brian. Even in Qaf, No one knew or cared for Brian like Justin. His two oldest friends Michel & Lindsy failed where Brian emotions were concerned.
Plot is really going good. Looking forward for More. 🙂
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
In regards to your 'chapter end notes'... if I can inject a suggestion... regarding NaNoWriMo... I presume Sally will be writing with you... so knowing she was 'excited' about a couple of past plot bunnies... (you can check her comments)...
#94: Brian agrees to attend comic-con... (not quite so heavy.)
#134: Brian severely beaten and left for dead... (Sally's comment was:)
HELLO, YES, SOMEONE WRITE THIS PLEASE, K, THANKS!
Under our current plots... #30: Justin goes missing in London... another good mystery!
And since I KNOW you love plot bunnies... I thought it was my duty as a reader to remind you of a few.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
When Justin first started his 'explanation' to Brian, I'm surprised Brian lasted as long as he did... because I was ready to start shaking him, telling him 'shit or get off the pot'! What a drawn-out explanation!
I was totally floored by the number of people in the girls' house! Sure, they got kicked out... but, why were they allowed in there in the first place? I mean, hell... Brian and Justin had to show I.D. in order to enter... so ALL THOSE PEOPLE makes absolutely no sense!
Prior to getting the ransom note... I'm still surprised they kept referring to the kidnapper as a man... especially with it being an infant... as the majority of infants are taken by women, wanting to either 'have a child' ... or 'replace a child' they have lost... so yeah, why haven't they even thought of that possibility? Did they even look into current child deaths?
I loved the 'He's With Me' ... it reminded me of 'I'm going with him'. Keep up the good work! I'm loving it!!!
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
Thank god B & J have finally connected, you cruel witch! LOL
This is getting very interesting now. Love it!
Ta
Deb L