[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2020 7:17 am Title: Chapter 14 - No Son Of Mine
Poor Gus and Justin completely at the mercy of mad people! And now, Brian is out of reach!
Author's Response:
Maybe, but I don't think Justin will stay compliant for long, do you? TAG
Date: Jan 07, 2020 3:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - No Son Of Mine
I love these little late night surprise postings!
I also love your very vivid description of a hungover Brian, LOL!
Somehow, I don't think anything Craig says will keep Justin from helping Brian or Gus!
Author's Response:
Surprise! 😉 TAG
Date: Jan 07, 2020 3:15 am Title: Chapter 14 - No Son Of Mine
Omg poor Gus and por Justin
Author's Response:
IKR! Poor babies... TAG
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2020 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
Am I actually going to be the 100th review???? Be still my heart!
This was really good... damn Mikey and his interference! At least Justin got out of there unscathed and got him and Brian back to the loft. It doesn't sound like little Gus is doing well... and it also doesn't appear as if they have him in a home... because from the description of the surroundings... it doesn't seem like it would be a home... unless he's hid in a basement. Out of Sight... Out of Mind.
I'm pretty sure Brian passed out from his inebriation. He doesn't usually give up the chance to be up close and personal... dang him!
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Congrats on being my #100! Thanks for reading! TAG
Date: Jan 01, 2020 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
thanks for update
Date: Jan 01, 2020 12:03 am Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
What a nice holiday gift!
Oh, I know Justin is persistent... he'll force Brian to relax if it kills them both, LOL!
Happy New Year!
Date: Dec 31, 2019 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
Argh come on Brian relax this is for Gus
Date: Dec 31, 2019 8:48 am Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
Oh God Brian needs to cooperate!! Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2019 5:55 am Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
Bwahaha! Justin's relaxing techniques are way too effective! At least, they are together without disturbance.
Happy New Year to you too!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2019 3:27 am Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
As much as Brian wants his son back, he needs to cooperate.
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2019 2:21 am Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
Great chapter and your cliffhangers are fantastic. Wonderful writing. Happy New Year and Decade to you, also. Perhaps you and Sally will come up with a story about the "new roaring twenties"!!! LOL
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2019 1:12 am Title: Chapter 13 - Just Relax
HapyyNewYear and gahhhhh. Open up already. 💞
Author's Response:
Come on - Brian doesn't DO emotions. Lol! 😉 TAG
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2019 5:48 am Title: Chapter 12 -That's It!
Brian has far More important matter. If Michel can't help, he should stop bothering Brian & Justin. I want to punch him badly.
Love the way Brian & Emmett bicker around and for Justin. Brian sure is possesive of Sunshine.Will They gonna get another. Every minute is important. Hope B&J get more time together.
ThankYou for update.
I wish that everything will fine with You & family. Happy Holidays & Take care. â¤
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2019 5:32 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
This close. God, atleast Brian knew now not to take Justin visions lightly. Fantastic writing & Chapter. â¤
Date: Dec 17, 2019 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 12 -That's It!
First, I'm sorry RL is a pain... I'm FULLY aware of how that can play havoc with writing schedules. I hope it eases soon for you. That said:
Daphne’s a good friend. Even if she has to do the whole book report herself, I think she would do that, so that Justin is able to spend as much time as possible together with Brian.
It seems like you MIGHT have given us a clue… something we might see later on. Or, am I, once again, going off on a wild goose chase. Reading something in where there is nothing? The VERY VIVID description of: the black hoodie down over his head, and smoothed out the fabric, making sure the ‘Ironman’ logo across his chest was straight, Hmmm... did you do that on purpose?
But, Michael is such a sleaze ball. Why would he even think Brian would want to go out drinking when his son is missing? And Emmett seemed a little too much like thinking he had a chance with Justin. I wish Brian would have just shown them all to the door... and shut and locked it.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2019 5:12 am Title: Chapter 12 -That's It!
Working instead of writing is such a chore, but can't do one without the other!
Hang in their Tag!
Deb L
PS - Think you are sending out red herrings, to lead us to Michael as the culprit. Then again maybe it's a double bluff, you are a sneaky one after all! LOL
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2019 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 -That's It!
Wonderful chapter. Love to hate Michael. My favorite part of most stories. Sorry that RL is taking more of your time, but it is necessary. No matter what or when, we will be happily waiting for new chapters, Hang in there and enjoy the holidays as much as possible. Fantastic writing as always. Sending thoughts, love and fortitude.
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2019 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 12 -That's It!
I'm wondering if you did let 2 clues for us in this chapter. How Michael could know that the ransom drop is on Tuesday and is the ‘Ironman’ logo on the black hoodie something that Justin might see/have seen in one of his visions?
Thank you for the update!
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2019 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 -That's It!
Darn, how do you manage to get Brian out of going to a tea dance? It's good to see Emmett though. Is the hoody Mikey has on important? You have the guys right on.
Date: Dec 10, 2019 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
This is just awesome. Update soon please.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
Craig's an ass... a dictator... I AM FATHER... YE SHALL OBEY! Are we surprised?
So much is going on. Brian and Justin are really connected. Whether it's from the sexual bond they shared... I'm not sure. I can't see Brian being an empath... because it sounds like this is the first time he's having these images... and it was only AFTER the deep sexual bond. It's good for him to know Justin is on the up and up... but my gosh... what an awful thing to be witness to.
Justin might have to break his grounding imprisonment, and sneak out of his window.
It ALMOST sounds like maybe Joan could be in on the kidnapping. Giving the kid whiskey... it worked for her... High maintenance. Just like your damned father... perverted. Hmm... Jack drank whiskey... and Brian grew up with it being his drink of choice.
Then the Priest said all he'd seen was his usual parishioners coming in for confession... hmm...
The note was on Copy Paper? Where would they get the use of that? IF Claire is involved... would she have access to a computer and printer at the hospital? Or if Mikey is involved... he definitely would.
I wonder just how far off we are... Questions... questions... questions.
Take care... I definitely know how life can play havoc... so I hope things get settled for you soon. Thanks for finding a little time and giving us an update.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Dec 03, 2019 2:04 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
Always great to see an update!
I was pretty sure I had the kidnapper figured out... but now I'm thinking that maybe there might be TWO relatives involved.
Not really sure about the B/J connection here... but from Justin's observations about Brian's emotions in the church, I'm guessing Brian is himself an empath, who has over the years suppressed that part of himself. But like Justin wants to know is, why?
Hope your RL settles down soon... and not just because I'm a shameless & greedy Fic reader, LOL!
Date: Dec 02, 2019 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
thanks for update
Date: Dec 02, 2019 10:32 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
Good update. I hope soon that Justin's field of vision will expand to see who is with Gus. Give whiskey to a baby! Joan must be there somewhere.
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2019 6:34 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here
One step forward on Brian's side, but a few steps backward for Justin. Craig will be watching like a hawk.