[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2022 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Yes it does take a village to raise a child and Thankfully Brian and Justin have surrounded themselves with good people to help them figure out how to make time for Colin, Gus and themselves so they don't get lost in the shuffle.
Mel and Lindsay have the same thing but the refuse to utilize the resources to make everything run smoother.
They want to prove to the world that they can do but they are failing at every turn and it is hurting Gus.
Author's Response:
Luckily for Gus, he has Brian and Justin and they want to be good parents.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2020 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Ok, sorry, just a point: during this story, you have JR's age ranging from 5 to 7 to 8, without the timeline changing. I really did love this story when I read it on MW, but this timeline thing bugged me. I know it is hard to remember what you have written in back chapters, when you leave gaps in updating. But perhaps you could correct it here?
Really sorry but I just had to point this out.
Take care,
Deb L.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the feedback. I'm going through the story and trying to catch the inconsidtencies.
Date: May 16, 2020 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
It's great that Brian and Justin are making Space for Gus but I suspect the girls will suddenly realise Gus isn't avaible to watch JR which might crimp their poor parenting style
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2020 4:25 am Title: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Thanks for the update! Curious to see how Gus’ living situation plays out.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2020 3:33 am Title: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Brian is smart and Justin managed to schedule everything. Gus is the winner here.