Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2020 2:06 pm Title: Taking Care of Business

I'm still catching up. I was excited to see another chapter posted this morning... I'll get there soon. But I wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying this. You've written Brian much the same as canon, only with enhanced qualities: Preditory and controlling of men.

You've managed to capture Michael's delusional mind perfectly. It's pretty bad when they've only known each other a mere few months and Michael thinks they're best friends. And did I read that right? Hubby works too much, so Michael's hoping for a side piece? UGH! It always gets when Michael points out 'blonds' are Brian's type, does he think since he, himself, is brunet, Brian will want him more? Yep, delusional!

Seth... Hmm... don't like him. You couldn't get closer to another Ethan type if you tried. Anyway, my mind is circling ideas why he wants to control Justin. Gosh, I hope it doesn't have anything to do with Hobbs - or Craig. And I have to wonder, have the two of them actually had sex? It was said: a long time... so I'm curious, if ever.

And is the story about Jennifer the truth? Does she even know where Justin is?

Lastly, I'm thinking even when Justin gets free of the meds, he'll still be able to block Brian. I think Mr. Kinney has met his match. But the question is, why? What kind of power does Justin hold? (Of course, I could be totally wrong, so you might be getting a good laugh!) If so, glad to oblige.

More later,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Thanks, Cathy. I'm glad you're enjoying this. I know vampire stories are not for everyone!

What can I say? Typically, I write the characters as I see them, which is probably why I always have Michael, and/or Ethan as extreme anti-characters. I just can't be nice to characters I detest; although, I have been nice to Michael in a couple of my stories. But, that's a rarity. My stomach just can't survive writing it - LOL.

In this story, I think the original character of Seth is more vile than Ethan could ever be. Thankfully, we don't have Ethan here; at least, we haven't yet. Hopefully, that doesn't change. Haha. Although, it's never been discussed, I think we can assume that Justin has had sex with Seth... as disgusting as that idea is.

Regarding Jennifer, I guess we'll see if she comes into the story. So much centers on Justin regaining his full memory. I think the big question for everyone so far is if Brian will be able to compel Justin at some point, and if not, why. I think the last chapter posted will finally answer that. :) 

And not a laugh on you at all. I think it stands to reason that there could be a deeper reason how Brian is blocked. You will find that out soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate that, and I hope you continue to enjoy this adventure.

Hugs,

Janet