Date: Jan 01, 2023 3:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Episode 20 (The King of Babylon)
I truly hope this hasn't been abandoned. I love a time travel fix-it. Plus I'm loving this Brian.
Date: Sep 22, 2021 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Episode 20 (The King of Babylon)
Loving this.
Date: Aug 23, 2021 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Episode 20 (The King of Babylon)
Lots going on with the King of Babylon. I think it's hilarious that Ted signed David up. And Michael was pissed. As far as Justin giving David the crown, dod ustin sill get the money and trip?
But Brian cheering Justin on and catching him... that was WAY better than Cowlip's.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2021 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Episode 20 (The King of Babylon)
I love this retelling.
Date: Aug 16, 2021 10:16 am Title: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)
Ding, dong, the wicked witch is dead... too bad Claire didn't follow suit. Man would Brian's life be easier.
Michael has a big mouth - but what else is new?
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Aug 16, 2021 2:23 am Title: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)
Wow now this is taking a very interesting turn lol I look forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2021 8:32 am Title: Chapter 18 - Episode 18 (Surprise Kill)
Soooo glad Justin getting along better in this one
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2021 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Episode 18 (Surprise Kill)
It's has to be hard for Justin to remember that far back, but you come up with good senarios for him to remember.
YAY! HE GOT INTO PIFA!!!!
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Aug 05, 2021 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Episode 17 (Solution)
I remember someone years ago wrote a one-shot called, "Mr. Snob". I bet you can figure out who it was and what it was about. The trouble with ol Mikey, is that he tries to adapt to the people aroind him so he fits in. And later on it'll be Eli and Monty.
It would have been interesting if in canon, someone called immigration, because at that point, Brian would have became custodial parent.
Love the story,
Cathy
Date: Aug 03, 2021 4:43 am Title: Chapter 17 - Episode 17 (Solution)
Lol love Justin with his phone calls lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2021 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Episode 17 (Solution)
I always thought immigration should have been called.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2021 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 16 Episode 16 (French Fried)
Gui was a weird character to bring into the story. Especially with Melanie being a lawyer. I'm surprised that she never laid out all the trouble that marrying Gui could make for Lindsay. I think if she would have said - You could lose Gus by doing this, Lindsay might have backed off.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jul 12, 2021 9:11 am Title: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)
I bet that just irked Melanie that everything was A-OKAY with Brian watching Gus. Funny how she had so little faith in him, yet he was an excelent father.
I like the agency having a daycare center.
And Michael definitely qualifies as wicked step-mother. I thought it was a funny quote, even if he didn't say it this time.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2021 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)
Hehehe. Melanie didnt get to beyotch at Brian.
Date: Jul 07, 2021 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 14 Episode 14 (A Change of Heart)
Excellent chapter I loved the whole different spin
Date: Jul 05, 2021 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 14 Episode 14 (A Change of Heart)
I was reading this forgot it was a re-write and kept thinking... "I've read this before", it was the Debbie keeping tips. I'm really into this again, love the re-write.
But I have one question, in the state of PA an inheirance can go to an 18 year old legally without input from a parent or guardian. Didn't Justin tell Ryder he was 18 years old, or was he fibbing so not to Brian in trouble.
Can't wait for more of this, loving it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2021 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 14 Episode 14 (A Change of Heart)
Hehehe. Take that Craig. What the heck is Jennifer doing? More please.
Date: Jul 05, 2021 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 14 Episode 14 (A Change of Heart)
I liked your new original characters.
Kip is a super slime person, no matter what.
Yay for Justin being emancipated. Craig can whine and not get a penny. And now the boys have start ip money for a new agency.
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: Jun 29, 2021 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 13 Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)
Yay for Brian wanting to already start his own agency. Poor baby Kip didn't get his way.
I hated the era of Lindsay with Gui, so hopefully you can smooth that over for them.
Enjoying this immensely.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jun 29, 2021 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 13 Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)
Loving this story and how you are changing some of the scenarios
Date: Jun 25, 2021 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Season 1 Episode 1(Premiere)
Just like Justin’s jambalaya, it’s always better the second time around. Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Jun 22, 2021 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 12 Episode 12 (Move It or Lose It)
I'm glad Justin was there for Emmett... Emmett needs someone level headed to talk this through with.
Mikey is a pain, and Justin could talk circles around him.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jun 08, 2021 1:04 am Title: Chapter 11 Episode 11(Surprise!)
Well, if only David could keep Mikey contained now. I approve of this party so much more than Cowlips!
And does it surprise me the police are trying to hard to find the robbers? Weren't there any city street cameras in the neighborhood?
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2021 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 10 Episode 10 (Queens of the Road)
What does Mikey know, Brian? He's a fool... don't listen t him. Especiallly after the whole Mysterious Marilyn and the B.R.I. ... incident.
Michael such a chicken shit, he can't even be can't even be honest with himself. Wuss.
It's a good thing the locks were changed, so nobody opened the door and Justin got harmed, but shucks, now we'll bever know.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: May 30, 2021 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 Episode 9 (Daddy Dearest (Sonny Boy)
Mikey, MIkey... Instead of Ted saying: We're things - he should have said - F.U. I'm outta here! ichael fails to realize that ALL these guys (Emmett included) stood a chance at holding their own a a dinner paty like that. Mikey's the only uncultured one in the bunch.
Let's pray the signing over of the rights doesn't happen this time around.
Hugs,
Cathy