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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 7:19 am Title: Chapter 12: Together at Last

Oh MY! Brian still wanted to bottom first. Well, as witches, they will have an eternity to switch off... and oh my! No Condoms Needed!

Good story. It's just too bad we didn't get a little excerpt of Mikey being warned to stop the yelling - or this is what is going to happpen to you! LOL

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Yeah, a torture Mikey segment would have been fun. I'm sure when I wrote this story it was a time when I had multiple WIP's. I remember for a whileI averaged three at a time I was working on, so the endings of a few got rushed more because of that.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, Cathy. I appreciate your support, as always.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 7:16 am Title: Chapter 11: A Brother's Love

Oh Emmett, Emmett, sweet Emmett. He gave Justin and Brian eternal life, and chose to live his as a normal man. I don't think Emmett liked having the power... and also loved his brother enough to give him his soulmate. I really loved Emmett in this story.

And Brian better be careful. Impish Justin might learn quick and learn something Brian can't so easily undo.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

That was the ultimate sacrifice from Emmett, but he was happy with his choice. I think everyone got what they wanted. I have the feeling Emmett will lead a charmed and safe human existence. I wouldn't want to be the one who attacked Emmett in any way. Brian and Justin would end them swiftly!

I did enjoy writing Emmett in this story. Thanks for the comment, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 7:10 am Title: Chapter 10: The End of the War!?

I'm so happy for Justin and Debbie. Debbie may have lost a louse of a son, but she gained a son with a good heart.

Brian, Brian... what he offered up was amazing, and all because he was jealous seeing Justin with someone else. LOL

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Justin feared that Debbie would hate him for being the instrument of her son's madness. That wouldn't happen. Clearly, she could see the good and innocence in Justin who was nothing but victimized by her son. 

Haha. Brian always has a backup plan. I'm sure he thinks Justin will return the favor...so to speak. I guess we'll find out!

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 7:08 am Title: Chapter 9: Shocking Discoveries

Poor Emmett - finding out who he THOUGHT was a friend, but actually an evil villian...that can be hard on a person.

I love the plan and punishment Brian came up with. Because the inmates are going to retaliate hearing him screming all night long, and not only the inmates, the guards can be harsh too.

Then Justin finally slept so well, only to have his world thrown off-kilter to learn how deep Michael's hatred went.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I do think a fitting punishment here. Death would have been quick and over. This way, Michael is sure to be tortured for a very long time. 

That is the ultimate betrayal for Emmett, his friend evil and conniving to kill his young friend. It's good that the truth finally was revealed.

Justin's night of rest had a price at the end, but he will rebound from that. Michael wasn't his friend, although I'm sure his heart will go out to Deb. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy!

:)

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2021 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 12: Together at Last

Nice

 

lah



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting! :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2021 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Deadly Secrets

If Emmett had the protection spell on Justin, does that mean NOBODY could have hurt him? It sounded like he was protecting Michael too.

Yet, Michael brought a tire iron to Emmett and Justin's home. So what could be have accomplished?

So it's a good thing Emmett's eyes are now wide open as to how deranged Michael is. And Brian NEVER belonged to Michael - See? Super delusional!

Pretty good trick though - you can strangle someone and not have fingerprints on their neck.

"So many difficult decisions... how will I decide?" Mwahahahaha!

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

The protection spell had dual purposes. It was supposed to protect Justin, and maybe it would have, but also to keep Brian from getting into Justin's head magically. Emmett knew his half-brother well enough to know what would happen once Brian met Justin. And, he wasn't wrong. LOL. 

Brian definitely has some tricks that could be very useful. It certainly was with the conniving and unhinged Michael.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2021 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 7: An Enemy Revealed

Michael is scary, and delusonal. I'm actually surprised the little twerp had the audacity to even ask Brian if he was repulsive to him. Brian screwed up! "YES, YES, YES!!! Your little dick does NOTHING to me!!!"

Yep, Ethan was easily swatted and is officially a hasn't been! LOL

So, Brian did hear evil harmful thoughts from Michael. I'm surprised Emmett hadn't picked up on that. He KNEW Michael didn't like Justin, so he should have tried to look for the reason. But Em doesn't expect his friends to be bad!

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

In this story it's surprising Brian didn't tell Michael what a repellent little rodent he is to him...but he was nice - sort of. That never helps with psychotic freaks! 

Emmett definitely looks for the best in his friends; although, he usually sees both sides...but this was just too dark to even think his friend what do to his young friend. A hard lesson learned.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2021 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: Crushes and Realizations

So, we need too see if Emmett's mere protection spell is something Brian will have to adhere to, or if he can overcome it.

OH CHRIST! An infactuated Ethan. Brian shouldn't have any problem swatting the little pest, especially if he shows up at Babylon.

Mikey, Mikey... I get very bad vibes from him. And I think Brian did too.

Was Emmett actually able to give Justin some sort of healing power?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I suppose given some time, Brian could find a way around Emmett's protection spell since he is more powerful, and most likely has some secret spells in his arsenal. 

Ethan is a bit of an afterthought in this story. Michael is really the bigger nuisance...but that's probably easy enough to discern. LOL.

Much to happen yet in what was a very short story for me.

Thanks for the comment!

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2021 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: A Day for Confrontations

Justin really should have BANGED the pan a couple more times while he was trying to get his point across that Emmett crossed the line.

Motor mouth Michael must have let his tongue waggle. But I suppose e wouldn't deny Brian anything.

And BROTHERS! Parden - HALF-brothers. Brian's stronger, thus he's the 'Dark One'.

HUGS,

Cathy

 



Author's Response:

Justin and Emmett have an interesting relationship, but I do enjoy writing them as friends. I haven't done that in many stories, but it's a fun dynamic. 

Brian could freeze Michael's lips shut and that would be fine. LOL.

Yeah, I thought the half-brother angle would be something unexpected and different. Brian is the stronger one, and has probably more than earned his 'Dark One' title. Haha.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: Peggy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2021 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 12: Together at Last

I was reading along, remembering most of the story and then BAM, I had forgotten about Michael and that tire iron. I never liked Michael and he got what he deserved.

Celebrate hard Boys!!

 



Author's Response:

Michael never gave up even if the odds were stacked against him. Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the comment! :) 

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2021 11:52 am Title: Chapter 12: Together at Last

Read before and just as good this second time around. Your stories are always so satisfying and captivating... luckily for all of us fans :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really appreciate hearing that. :) 

Thanks for reading and the comment. It's much appreciated! 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2021 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 9: Shocking Discoveries

thanks for update



Author's Response:

Your welcome!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2021 11:02 am Title: Chapter 8: Deadly Secrets

thanks for update.  kill that darn Michael



Author's Response:

Your welcome. One way or another, Michael needs to go.

Thanks for the comment. :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2021 9:48 am Title: Chapter 4: A Challenge Issued

I'm a top - You're a top. Who's gonna top? What a fun game for our boys. A frustrating one though! But shame on Mr. Kinney for blocking the guys from circling Justin... it's making him doubt himself now.

The more pragmatic side of him wished he could market him for reproduction in all his clubs. LMAO! Couldn't you just see a bunch of Justin's dancing all around the world in Brian's clubs? Would he be an illusion, or could Brian make the real thing? (I'm just being snarky!) Because it's such a funny thought!

The ending took a little ominous turn...

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

The battle of the 'tops.' Let the games begin... Haha.

I suppose in this 'verse, Brian could make a holgraphic double, triple, or how many ever of Justin. Interesting or scary thought, I don't know! LOL.

A touch of drama to uncover, but this is a short story, so not too long to work through. 

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2021 7:12 am Title: Chapter 3: An Offer He Can't Refuse

So, let the GAME commense. It doesn't sound like either one will back down. But Justin just earned probably the easier thousand he ever did in his life. I'd dance for a thousand - we may have to blindfold everyone first. This body doesn't move at 65 like it did at 25! LOL

Emmett seems super protective of Justin. Is it because he saved his life - or is there more?

And with every chapter, my unease with Michael grows. If Ted noticed Michael looking at Justin with a crazed look - and since Brian has clearly chosen Justin over Michael on Brian's first night home - Michael may be out to get and eliminate Justin.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

That does seem like an offer too good to be true, and definite easy money. I'm sure Brian thought the outcome would be much different, and easy pickings for him. But, he doesn't know our sweet Justin too well yet. LOL.

The Emmett and Justin dynamic is important in this story. More will be known soon. :) 

You are smart to be uneasy about Michael. There are definitely some puzzle pieces to fall into place here.

Thanks for the comment, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2021 7:03 am Title: Chapter 2: An Unforgettable Meeting

Mikey's jealousy is going to get him in a world of trouble with Brian - I think Brian was VERY unimpressed with that: Both are overreated comment. Tsk, tsk, Mikey. You should learn to keep your mouth shut. Hmm, there's an idea. Maybe Brian can conger that up in his mind and have Mikey's mouth sewed shut like Emmett mentioned about the undertaker in canon. LOL

And I hope Mikey stomped childish away. I mean, what would Brian want with a CHILD when he can have a MAN?

Well, Brian may have succeeded in sending Justin's twink packing, but I don't think he's going to get the blond in question.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Mikey never seems to be able to hold in his snide comments about Justin. In canon, maybe Brian would overlook it, but here, probably not the wisest of moves. 

Brian probably won't get what he wants easily with Justin, even if he thinks he can lay claim to everything he wants. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: Peggy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2021 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Change is in the Air

I am so pleased that you are adding your stories to this site and that I get the pleasure

to read them again. It's like Christmas in May!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm really glad to be posting them here. From here on out they are only going to be here and at A03. So you only need to look in one of two places. 

I hope you enjoy the re-read. Thanks for leaving a comment. :) 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2021 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Change is in the Air

darn Michael, never liked him



Author's Response:

i agree. I've never liked him either which is probably why I write him as I do.

Thanks for the comment. :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2021 7:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Change is in the Air

Little Mikey is jealous! He only wishes he had an ass like Justin's - or maybe has even had the pleasure of SEEING it up close and personal.

But if he's hung up on the elusive Mr. Kinney, maybe he is just plain old green-eyed after noticing Justin's attributes.

And it appears like we don't have long to wait for Mr. Kinney's appearance!

Let the Fun Begin!

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Oh yes, little Mikey could be a bit of a pest here...but I think one that will be easily swatted down. LOL.

Mr. Kinney should arrive on the scene very soon...

Thanks for commenting, Cathy!

Hugs,

Janet

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