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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2021 5:07 am Title: Chapter 49: Becoming Better Acquainted

That was a nice father-daughter bonding moment. I think if Brian continues with the talks, Jasmine will eventually perceive him as father, and once Lindsay’s out of the way, Jasmine can continue to grow into her own.

Maybe it would be best to have Ben present for that conversation with Lindsay. If Brian is able to control himself, he’s made of much better stuff than I, myself am.

I hope Lindsay has to watch Ethan being beheaded (please let that be his punishment.) She can know what’s coming, and she can also know she’s the cause of him losing his life.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think Jasmine will make an excellent addition to the family. It's scary how she's so much like her father and she just met him. I guess genetics means something. We will just forget Lindsay's part in that - LOL. That would be perfect for Lindsay to be forced to watch...but things are probably going to go awry. You've finished the story, so I guess you know that too. Haha. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

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