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Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 4:26 am Title: Chapter 33 - Best Laid Plans . . . (May 20, 2000 ­ 1:30 pm)

Okay, is it just me or were you going from the year 2002 back to 2000 and back again??? 



Author's Response:

Time isn't linear in this story so does it really matter? LOL....TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Best Laid Plans . . . (May 20, 2000 ­ 1:30 pm)

Another hard part for several reasons:
- Justin puts 2&2 together and knows who was the good Samarithan and why Brian wasn't at the restaurant on December 31th
- many people lied to him to avoid more stress
- he also realizes that this day is the D day and he can't warn Brian because he asked him not to write anymore, therefore, not to wait for other letters

For once, Michael's usual foot in the mouth helps to let Justin know where the painting is coming from.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2016 2:21 am Title: Chapter 33 - Best Laid Plans . . . (May 20, 2000 ­ 1:30 pm)

No!  Tears are coming down. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Best Laid Plans . . . (May 20, 2000 ­ 1:30 pm)

OH MY FUCKING GOD. I have literally sat here all night reading this and I never put two and two together. Am I dumb? JUSTIN HAS TO STOP HIM. Wait, is that even possible? I have confused myself so much LOL



Author's Response:

WOW! You read fast! Can't believe you finished the whole thing in one night! I'm impressed. TAG

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