Date: Aug 26, 2016 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ÂThe Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 Â 7:30 pm)
Brian is so worried he almost became too talkative. At least, he didn't destroy his letter.
How will Justin react? Will he explain what happened?
Date: Aug 26, 2016 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Terrors in the Night (August 9, 2001 Â 2:00 pm)
Weird chapter. Justin has huge problems linked to the bashing.
Maybe this episode was harder because the bracelet wasn't on his wrist.
The worse is that he missed Brian.
Author's Response:
Ooooo - you caught onto the bracelet thing! Love it! Not many people seem to get that little part. I'm thrilled. TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Self Portraits (August 9)
I could just imagine Brian's face discovering the drawing.
It's so rare for him to really laugh, and this was so primal as a reaction.
Justin isn't shy either.
Great chapter!!!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Discussing Photos.
Delicious dialogue between these two strangers. So happy they resume their exchanges.
I loved Brian's comment: "you show me yours..."
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Meanwhile, Back At the Ranch . . .
I get why Justin left the lobby while "discussing" with Brian.
Fortunately, he found some personal information. Now, he knows Brian is not a troll...
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Distractions.
Hot and efficient!
Poor Brian, completely focused on his mailbox... and maybe on his tenant.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Resigning Oneself to The Impossible. (August 7)
Some interesting facts/information here:
- Justin now knows Brian is gay and not shy about it
- Justin can talk about the bashing but not about the effects
- Justin had won a trial against Chris, which is why he's autonomous
Date: Aug 26, 2016 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Can This Really Be Happening? (August 6th, 5:15 pm)
Hilarious!
They both think they are headed to the psych yard. At least, they see the same phenomenon.
Now they know they are not in the same year, they will have to communicate what else they know (the new address of Brian for exemple).
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Yes, I read fast, especially when I love the story line.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Mailbox (August 7, 2001)
The reply from Brian was so typical: short, to the point with a few "fuck" to put some weight to his anger.
Poor Justin, his initial opinion will be tarnished after that.
The strange function of the mailbox is visible: excellent!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Meet Brian. (August 5, 1999 Â 9:30 pm)
Excellent beginning of the chapter with some cannon lines.
I could see Brian's expression while he read the letter ("what the fuck?" style).
Author's Response:
Boy you read fast! LOL. Glad you're liking it so far! TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 - An Eager Correspondent (August 5, 2001 Â 4:45 pm)
Justin is starting to get in the loft's mood and to imagine what Brian does look like.
I love the handprints in the kitchen.
The exchange of letters begins, let's see what he will get in return.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Welcome (August 5, 2001)
So many important things here:
- the bracelet which has an effect on his attack
- the letter, hand written, with a light remain of perfume, with a meaningful content
- the condoms box
- the angst to go out
- the envy to meet Brian
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: Aug 25, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day (August 4, 2001)
So happy you had this inspiration and started writing!
I also loved this movie and can't help it, I cry each time when she puts 2 & 2 together at the end as she realizes he's dead, and she hurries to put the last letter in the box and waits until...
I love the drama mood you put in this first chapter.
Author's Response:
Oooooo - so excited to see someone who's familiar with the original read this. Can't wait to see your take on my QAF adaptation. I'm still very proud of this one, even though it was my first. Thanks for reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Sweet! I love it! And you know I'm all about the love!!!
Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 23, 2016 2:11 am Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Great story and I think you're an excellent writer. Definitely keep t g email coming. Looking forward to reading more of yuor stories.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Broken Date. (December 27, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Tears! He didn't show because he couldn't... Because it was bashed at the prom... But I still don't believe he's dead, maybe they both have brain damage... How am I doing?
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 20, 2016 11:51 am Title: Chapter 27 - The Prom. (November 20, 2001 Â 2:00 pm)
I still can't help feeling that Brian was killed trying to protect Justin at the prom... And Justin just doesn't remember. Jennifer must have decided that it was better for Justin not to remember, therefore he can't make the connection to Brian...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
You're getting warmer . . . TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 11:35 am Title: Chapter 26 - Â Following Directions. (November 10, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Wash, Rinse, Repeat!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 10:52 am Title: Chapter 24 - Pain and Panic (October 5, 1999 – 7:00 pm)
Smiling my Sunshine smile! I knew my romantic Brian was in there somewhere...
I have so many scenarios runny through my head, but I know... Read the fucking story! This is getting really good! Loving it!
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 20, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 30 - Broken Date. (December 27, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Question... the non-dinner at El Mare was December 31st, 2001, yet Justin writes on January 1st, 2000, that Brian hadn't shown up, and that "it didn't work."
Is this just a typo, or perhaps another quirk in the timeline necessary for plot development?
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 12:53 am Title: Chapter 22 - After the Art Show (October 2, 1999 – 9:00 pm)
“I love you, Justin. I love you!†Because we all know he did say it that first night... This was wonderful! Squeeze!
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Playtime (September 6, 2001 – 6:20 pm)
Congratulations Dad, now you have two babies... So very hot indeed...
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 19, 2016 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Reciprocating Gifts (August 21, 2001 – 2:00 pm)
Now I have visions of a naked Brian on full display... Runs to bedroom...
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Then you should take a 'nap' . . . *wink wink* LOL TAG
Date: Aug 19, 2016 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Opening Up (August 10, 2001 – 4:00 pm)
What no ghosts! Well that totally blows my second theory, that it was Brian that tried to save Justin at his prom and was bashed along with Justin...
Okay back to the story...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 19, 2016 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Sweet Dreams (August 10, 2001 Â 8:00 am)
Now that was HOT!!! Loved it!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Glad you approve - the story was in need of some hot just then. TAG