[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2019 7:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
Deb Like Michael and Lindsay is just looking for any excuse so Michael will continue bit be innocent in her eyes, despite everything she is finding out she is still blaming Brian and w for not bending to get will like Michael blames her for not getting the others to do the same.
Deb should be in a cell right along side Michael she showed him how to be this way by bullying everyone else and now it is all coming back to bite her in the Ass.
Confronting Lindsay won't change the fact that Deb doesn't deserve forgiveness no matter how contrite she may seem cause she will go back to her bullying ways the second it effects Michael.
With the trials coming up Deb will get worser with every new piece of evidence that is revealed so it is best of everyone protects themselves against her even The Avenue will feel her wrath.
No One Will Ever Be The Same Again.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2019 11:53 am Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
First, isn't MR. EDWARDS straight? How is it Debbie thought he was wanting to get together *that way* with Michael in order to pay for his legal fees? And I thought Debbie earlier said she was paying for Michael's attorney? Now we find out it's Pro Bono? How did Debbie figure she hired him and is paying him?
It amazes me that Debbie is actually starting to see that Michael IS at fault. As much as she wants to blame Lindsay for putting all these thoughts in his head, after visiting him and hearing from his own mouth just what he's done, well... she can't help but see the real Michael.
And as much as she doesn't want to see Lindsay, and knows she will try to make herself the victim, she realizes Lindsay will tell the truth of Michael's involvement.
But I think that the mention of Craig and Chris Hobbs is what really tipped Deb off that Michael was more involved than she thought. But how awful that Craig has been embezzling from Justin from way back. I think Craig is in a world of trouble.
I do believe their conversation was taped at the prison?
HUGS ~Cathy
PS... I'm all caught up, and now I'm sad, sad, sad.
Author's Response:
Good Morning, Cathy! Thanks for all of your reviews. They were beyond entertaining. In fact, even this one made me hiccup with laughter at times. A couple of things:
First, about Galviston Edwards: He's definitely gay. In fact, Back when he was introduced as a character, he and Annette had a conversation about his friend, Tom... as in THE Reverend Butterfield, who Brian had an encounter with. Gal was the man, who Justin was plowing right next to them. Nice twist on an extra in the show without an actual storyline beyond a grunt or groan, right? LOL
Secondly, as for Debbie and paying for Michael's attorney: In this she is sort of like Michael. I took the outright lie that Michael spouted about how Brian 'begged' him to go to the hospital with him to see Gus the night he was born, and applied that sort of selective memory to Debbie. It also stems from how she thinks Brian 'owes' her for all she's done. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate Debbie as I do Michael. But there are certain aspects of her character I disliked immensely. And let's face it, Michael had to have learned a few of those unbecoming traits from her. In this case, it's how they make themselves seem so important and indispensible, when really they are emotional bullies, intrusive and forgettable when it really counts. It's why she's lauding to everyone who will listen that she's paying for Michael's defense attorney, when in reality, Michael's 'assets' were frozen, and since Legal Aid has been called in the case has been passed on to Galviston.
Thirdly, you are absolutely CORRECT in all you've said about the Michael-Debbie-Lindsay arc of things. And yes, Craig is going to be in a world of trouble. The question is: how's he going to save himself, if that's even possible?
I'll have another chapter up soon, but I have to get what in my head out of it regarding my other 'babies' first.
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 08, 2019 5:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
thanks for update, however I had to start to read it again from the beginning because I forgot most of it becase it tok so long. Please dont let your fans hang there
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2019 4:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
I was hoping Debbie will finally admit that her son is guilty, but then, she is on her way to "absolve" him and blame Lindsay, even after what he just admitted!
She is beyond recovery (not sure it's the correct term though, but my English is not great today)!
Date: Aug 07, 2019 1:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2019 8:20 am Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
It would had not come this far if Deb had realised how immature, whiny, manuplated Micheal is. Looks like she still not ready to see full mirror. Micheal raging, fuming is always a bliss. Great!
So glad to see your update. Kudos to your writing. Hugs â¤
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2019 12:05 am Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
Deb needs to be in a cell right along with Michael, Lindsay, Craig and all the other cohorts she is just as bad as they are.
Cause she expects everyone to remain in their place and the moment they go against her demands she yells and bullies to get her way.
Michael isn't stupid he is just lazy and conniving when it comes to what he wants and needs Deb raised him to be a Spoiled Selfish, Inconsiderate Brat so she deserves to lose everything too.
Deb knows Michael isn't innocent but if she doesn't have to admit that he will is not to blame for his predicament then she isn't alone.
Too bad like Michael and Lindsay's plans it is backfiring Big Time and she has lost everyone who would've stood by her and helped her which is Her Fault.
Deflecting blame to Brian and Justin won't change the fact that Michael's hands aren't just covered in a little dirt but they are buried ten feet deep and will Never be clean again.
Talking to Lindsay won't change anything cause despite hearing the truth from Michael's own lips Deb will keep her head buried in the sand waiting for her baby to come home to her loving arms.
Deb doesn't understand love she just understands control which Michael learned at her knee.
Way To Go Ma!😡
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2019 11:53 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
Hi Nichelle, Hope all is well with you. Great chapter. I love how you can make Michael out to be such a shit. Wonderful writing as always.
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2019 10:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD
I always thought parents were supposed to teach their children right from wrong, not just side with them no matter what.