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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2020 8:00 am Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN

I always love a WASP attack when it's so well written.

I'm wondering why John didn't move forward earlier? Didn't he know that Brian was his son? He could have contacted him once he was 18 years old.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2020 7:30 am Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN

It looks like Brian will be able to enjoy a real father and a whole loving family

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 11:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN

Joan and Lindsay thought they were so clever but their jealousy and hatred has lead them to reap what they have sown which just means their repercussions have yet to fully come beyond this mortal plane.

Brian and Claire can now walk away knowing that Joan is truly out of their lives and they never have to deal with her games ever again, because if she tries she will regret coming up against this family.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 8:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN

thanks for update

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 8:35 pm Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN

Gonna have to go back and reread this. Keep the great writing up.

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