Date: Jun 28, 2019 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
Did my review three times with this chapter... the last time writing everything out by hand, and not copying from the chapter. WHY are there such wide spaces between sentences?
Author's Response:
LOL! I completely understand, Cathy, since I often have to reformat the chapter after it's posted. In this case though, the posting screen is auto-formatted to double spaced, so when you hit 'return' or 'enter', it double spaces again. Hope this helps! And THANK YOU for all of the reviews! They mean so MUCH!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 28, 2019 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
"What am I suppose to tell everyone?" Okay folks... we have a very mature adult her. NOT!
But with the new children, if Brian cuts Lindsay out, where would that leave him? WHAT THE HELL??? They actually think Lindsay should be watching these children? I wouldn't trust her watching a cat, and they're pretty self sufficient.
Glad the boys are together in L.A. ... out of reach from Michael and Lindsay... with no chance of them showing up at the door.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Dec 06, 2016 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
Great and very looooooong chapter! Yeah!!!! Thank you so much!
Some many things I love in there. But, the most important is the fact that they are finally going to talk.
George is a genius and I'm glad to see more of him.
I could only imagine the face of Justin discovering Brian at the door... What a shock.
Date: Dec 05, 2016 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
Oh man............that song was PERCTION for this chapter! I completely see the correlation and why it so inspired you. bloody briliant!
wondering when Justin, Brian etc will find out about Ethan's involvement with Michael and how he was the one who vandalized the car. Now that will be an interesting scenario! Ethan certainly has everyone fooled for the most part. some may not like him, but I don't see anyone being aware of his machinations in it all. (well except for Phoebe that is)
And speaking of Phoebe....I'm really disappointed that she'sd one nothing about how much she knows...what all she overheard.
Thankfully Brian went to see Justin! (george and Malcolm are sly foxes aren't they? Gotta love them!) NOW they can FINALLY have thatheart to heart they so desparately need. the fact that he's the one to instigate it is nothing short of miraculous! It truly shows the depth of his feelings for Justin.
I am devastated for Brian though. He knows how devious his 2 supposed "best friends" are now and he must be so heartbroken over it. His illusion of their friendship is completely shattered.
So happy to see this update. The next 2 as well.
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
All caught up again. This simple little plot bunny sure is going a long way. LOL! TAG
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 4:56 am Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
What an amazing chapter. I like your scenero on George better then the series. Love the pics and the storyline is to die for. Brian and Justin together is a good sign.
Date: Dec 04, 2016 12:23 am Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
Fab fab fabulous! Love how Justin feels so at home in LA and is clearly healing, getting his own thoughts & wants settled in his head. My goodness, Justin's little house is the cutest! Where did you find those photos? Awesome! And George's gorgeous home in the Hollywood Hills...wow! I want to live there!
Yay Brian shows up! They really are so awkward with each other, it's weird...our poor boys really do need to get their shit together. Can't wait for their 'discussion'
Author's Response:
Hey Shine!!! I LOVE Justin's house too. I'm obsessed with a few shows. One is called "Tiny House Builders" which is where the exterior pics came from and the other is called "Tiny House BIG Living." There is a place in Colorado called Rocky Mountain Builders who manufactures these houses which is where the interior pics came from. The things these artists (for that is truly what they are) do to this houses with about 500 square feet at the most is nothing short of amazing! The shows air on HGTV (which is certainly my guilty pleasure) and the DIY Network (yeah... I'm obsessed with that channel too). George's house in the Hollywood Hills has always been a dream of mine. Ahhh maybe someday I can find my own palace or if not, I'll just have a tiny house built to look like one! LOL
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 04, 2016 12:23 am Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY
Have I told you how much I LOVE this story? LOL. Okay, I know i have... but it bears repeating - I freaking LOVE IT! There are so many variances I could touch on. If I do that, I will be here in this little comment box all night!
I loved the talk between Justin and the chinrat. Muse. Ugh. I've used that many times myself. I always shudder as I write it. Ethan is always so stale. I don't think it's possible to write him to be interesting - not even a GREAT writer like yourself! Perhaps if we didn't know him, couldn't visualize him, or hear his nasaly, whining voice - maybe, just maybe it would be possible. Let me ponder on that. Hmmm. Nope. He's still boring. LOL.
But again, and to move this revieew forward.. I love all of this chapter. Whether I like some of the characters or not - some I utterly loathe (obviously we know which ones), your characterizations and progression is amazing. The detail is immense, and I am enjoying it more than I can say.
Thank you for another amazing chapter, Chelle. This story is utter brilliance.
As always, looking forward to more!
*Hugss*
Janet