Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 21: GIVE ME THE REASON (Melanie and Others)

First off.....HI!!!! *waves frantically* so glad to see you updating this one!

What a freaking brilliant chapter to bring us up to date. I was wondering what all was happening back in teh Pitts. gotta say.OMFG!!!!!!! Was peeing myself laughing at Ethan! That. Was. HILARIOUS!! What a completel  idiot! You'd think he would've caught on to teh fact that "Lindsey" seemed to not be acknowledging anything. That she was ignorant of all the plans and her involvement. Oh man...that was EPIC! So...now that  Mel knows everything, or at least a good portion of it, how will she tell Justin adn Brian? They are going to come back to some awful news. While Justin may not have completely ended it with Ethan yet, he certainly was going to, but now? OH wow! I'm thinking major legal action! Phoebe came at the perfect time too. Now he's going to be distracted for and/or with the Heifitz competition. will he screw it up? Will he get it and then lose it due to his involvement with Justin's car, which is definitely a criminal offence? will he lose it entirely and blame justin and everyone else? OH the many possiblities!! Definiltey looking forward to what your brilliant mind has in store!

The fact that he still thinks that he and Brian are going to "co-parent" the babies is...well it's just unbelivable! I mean there are peole that are deluded...then there's michael. He is on a whole other level!! 

Lindsey while not necessarily deluded (as much) is beyond the scope of, not so much evil per se, but so bloody devious! Her plans with Clarence will sure to come back and bite her in teh ass. Since her parents have access to her emails, any plans she and Clarence come up with will also be intercepted.At least he's keeping Mel in the loop. If it were Nancy, I don't see that happening. Will nancy put up resistance with the kids? Hmmm, not if ron has anything to say, besides, she's too much in need of his pursestrings. 

Wicked note to Michael he wrote. I doubt that will stop Michael from trying to contact Lindsey, but it will just go to Ron anyway and he will keep brushing Michael off. AS for what's actually ins store for Lindsey..oh la la! Again...can't wait! as well as  finding out about what clarence is all about.

While we may not have heard from you in a while re: updates, having2 in a day was wonderful!! thank you for such a treat! I've been wondering what was going on. 

Off to read the next chapter!

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:28 am Title: Chapter 21: GIVE ME THE REASON (Melanie and Others)

That's an ominous ending. What secrets does lindz' new beau have? Oh, the intrigue . . . TAG

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 21: GIVE ME THE REASON (Melanie and Others)

So glad you updated on everyone. I was getting tired of the date.