[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2019 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
I want to thank you for the comedy routine. Molly's a little spitfire... kind of like Justin was when he first started coming around. I was trying to figure out how old she would be... possibly 13? She had a pretty good mouth on her though. I could almost hear: Molly! Language!!
I hope Jennifer cleans the account out leaving a balance of $5.00.
It was funny Nancy going up to confront Lindsay... but you know, it might have been funny to have had Clarence go up... ENOUGH!!! Stop acting like a two-year-old!!! And quit being jealous of a nineteen-year-old! But that's okay... It sounds like Annette has a vendetta against loosy. I did forget to comment on Lynette's "Falling into it."
Well, I had a few good laughs last couple of chapters.
I think I better lay down for a while. I've been up all night and day reading.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Craig and Mr Mayweather, what a hypocrite!!! Brian and Brandon brothers? Squeals! Jail time for Michael, Lindsay and the Fiddlefuck... I'm loving this fic!
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2017 8:55 am Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Boy, you sure weave intricate plots. How do you keep track of all this? Lol. TAG
Date: May 10, 2017 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Whoa!!! What a dense and key chapter!!!
The news about Craig is hilarious if not dramatic knowing what he did to Justin. Molly has some reflex and I loved how she explained what happened and why!
The other major info is Molly knowing Brian and why!
What I didn't get was about the father having an other son that could be Brian; I don't get the implication(s).
I loved the "baby whisperer".
Author's Response:
Hey Claire!!
Molly is a MESS! It was so much fun to write about her discovery. She is definitely Justin's sister. Brilliant and BALLSY! LOL
To answer your question about Brian, you have to go back to Chapter 21, which is the first part of the date. Brian isn't sure who his father really is, although by all accounts Jack was believed to be. Joan had a drunken one-night stand with her brother-in-law (who was Jack's twin brother)- a situation similiar to how Brian and Lindsay ended up in bed during college. A few days later when John left, she was forced to have sex with her husband after they fought. And that, my dear, is where the implication lies.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 10, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
OMG!!!! WTF!! Girl, You are killing me with all these twists and turns! So, Nancy and Ron Peterson being Brian and Justin's voyeurs and buying the Rage paintings was a huge shocker in and of itself but Craig Taylor a closeted gay man??? Again, WTF??? And Ewww not a sexy visual!!! Lord almighty! I need some brain bleach!! I have no sufficient words for this turn of events!! You have once again succeeded in sending me into a tailspin for the rest of the day and possibly tomorrow! Thank you for that!
On another note, I'm glad that Taryn knows about Michael and Lyndsay's deception and she has met the boys. And I'm more than thrilled that Ethan the chin rat confessed everything but I'm curious what kind of deal they want to offer him.
As always, great update! Can't wait to see how this all plays out! Thanks for the update Nicole and looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey Laura!
That whole Craig thing was.... is.... YIKES! The stuff that happens in this story is just WOW! Save me some of that brain bleach because I'm sure to need it, LOL
Taryn is just as much a victim of Lindsay and Michael's lies as Brian is. But I think that she will still come out on top just as the rest of them will. I can certainly see a friendship developing between her and the remaining members of the family. After all, look at Brian and Mel and how they are developing now that Lying-lips Lindsay is out of the picture.
Ethan's confession will be addressed in the next chapter or so, including getting Justin and Michael's reaction to it. The deal hasn't been offered yet since the victim's rights to seek restitution has to be honored. Either way Ethan will definitely see a punishment of some sort; it just depends on how gracious Justin is willing to be.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 10, 2017 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Woah!! ther are a few jaw dropping moments in this chapter!! Nancy's complete disdain for herown daughter is...actually pretty freaking funny! Her reaction to Lindsey's meltdown was priceless. Everyone else laughing it up downstairs was great too. Lindsey seems to think that she's in the "circle" just because of her parents. She's stuck between a rock and a hard place and it's completely her own doing. Don't think she's going to have to worry about where to live for very long. Pretty sure the state will happily provide her with housing, 3 meals/day and will even outfil her in soem very nice orange garments. :) ;)
Now...the next and ABSOLUTE BEST jaw dropper!! OMFG! Molly outing her dad!!!!!!!! I freaking well nearly died laughing! (when I wasn't bleaching my eyeballs at the visual I had) that was...that was...EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that she hit him in the nards with a fry pan!! I'm DYING HERE!!!!!!!! LMFAO!
And Brian's secret is out now. Justin now REALLY knows how much Brian cares. always did. Nice to see Molly and Justin reuniting too.
anticpating the DA seeing the family. So much info. Ethan I think really saved his own bacon here, but that won't help him in teh least with Justin. Hopefully he'll just slink off like the snake he is.
Very happy to have this to read. Was so excited ot see it. Am anticipating the next one now!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hey Elaine!
I really like writing Nancy and Ron this way! It's nice to see a change instead of them buying into Lindsay's foolery. As for Ms. Plans, herself, she's going to receive several wake up calls during the rest of this fic. Now that Annette is out for revenge, I think she is really going to find out what it's like to face the consequences of her actions. She's offended so many people in her quest to be Queen Bitch that watching her downfall will be satisfying to say the least.
Molly is DYNAMITE! She is definitely her brother's sibling in that she's brilliant and ballsy to boot. Craig deserved that shot to the nads and so much more... which he will be getting if he tries to mess with any of the other Taylors. Let's hope he does...LOL
I always thought that if Molly and Brian were able to meet, they would have done it this way. It's wonderful to write them as building a rapport with one another without the initial opinions of the parents between them. Considering the bio-sister that Brian had, I think the relationship between Molly and Justin will show Brian that it doesn't always have to be a source of contention. Considering that Brandon is in town asking about Brian, this may be a really good time for him to see that.
Ethan's fate will really rest in Justin's hands, even though he doesn't know it yet. It depends on how gracious Justin feels like being when faced with the opportunity to throw the book at the Vacuous Violinist.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
What an interesting twist. Craig is gay! Molly is amazing. I'm betting at least one of the babies is Justins. This gets more interesting with each chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Phyllis! I love writing intricate plots but there is so much that is surprising me in this storyline. Every chapter is a surprise! In this one, Molly was mine, LOL I knew she would make an appearance but that girl...!!! WHEW! Still laughing at that scene!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 4:56 am Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
All I want to say is NICE SHOT Molly!!!
ROFLMAOPIMP!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
That was seriously too much FUN to write!!! I couldn't even stop laughing! ROFLMAOPIMP for real!!
HUGS,
~Chelle