Date: Aug 28, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
My mind is blown by how involved Mcichael and Lindsey are with all the schemes they've perpetrated against Justin. Unreal. From the robbery, involving Ethan, the prom, Hobbs...my goodness. Justin is out for blood now and rightfully wo. Seems like Brian is fully supporting him as well. I hope he does get the house and then signs it back over to Deb. (depending on her reaction to all that her son has been up to and what Justin is doing) There's no way she can excuse his behaviour at all. No way she can lay it at Brian's feet. At least I hope not. My goodness I am really excited about what you will have happen next!! It's a real nail biter.
Looking forward to Emmett and Ben living together. Even if it's just friends at first, I've always thought that they have a neat dynamic and would love to see something happen between them. I've always enjoyed fics that have them together. They would balance eachother out nicely and Emmett is far more intelligent than many people give him credit for. I think Ben already knows that. Ben will just need time to get over the fact he married an asshole.
Am REALLY excited for the next update!! I hadn't caught up with a few of the updates, so had to go back and read the whole thing. Oh such a chore... NOT! So wonderful. Have always been such a massive fan of your writings. No idea who many times I've read them over and over again.
Till next time.............
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jul 25, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
I NEED MORE!!!!!! So good.
Date: Jul 25, 2017 2:36 am Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
This should be very ineresting- glad that Brian is supporting Justin in his efforts- now if this time the courts actually support Justin and Brian- all will be good- I know that folks sometimes feel for Debbie but in many ways she is maniupulating and does as much harm to Brian as Mikey does to him. By making Brian feel guilty and not act based on what "she did" for him as a teen, she is just as bad as the rest of them. No one should hold Brian's actions or reactions as something he "owes them" based on their acts when he was a teen. ( hopefully that made sense)
Date: Jul 23, 2017 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
Whoa! What an interesting plot. You had an amazing story-line for the whole Chris period.
The WASP's reactions are so funny, despite the facts that are exposed.
Date: Jul 23, 2017 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
Wow! Cut throat Sunshine! You go baby! Michael & Lindsay are toast! Of course they set Justin up...assholes!
I really enjoy the Emmett/Ben dynamic
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2017 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
Oh, I love this. You've tied everything together and added a lovely bow. Can't wait to see how the next chapter comes out.