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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 7:06 am Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

The Unmentionables. Ethan should really be informed about his etch-a-sketch pencil line reference. Oh well, Prince Wannabe should have had no problem walking afterward. Criminy... the stuff you come up with is legend. I loved the Gollum and Maleficent references too. Perfect.

Be it may that you referred to Brian as incorrigible, I always think of Mikey with an incorrigible behavior/child. I do think Smartass fits Brian pretty good. But with good reason.

The Garden of Eden... maybe they should take a trip to the Fairy Capo. LOTS of Nakedness there. Let it ALL hang out!!!

All that said, from the moment Tory walked into Justin's office to the end of the chapter, I was thoroughly entertained. Quite a few chuckles happened to escape. And at 3 a.m., lord, but I was trying to be quiet! I don't know how you manage to do that time and time again!

“Crystal, Mr. Taylor,” he hoarsely whispers. 😂

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 12:53 am Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

Love long chapters! Awesome awesome awesome!!! The unmentionables 1-3 are toast. Lol Such a fun chapter! Justin's office's sound like a dream and quite stylish. I want Tory to be my friend. 'Mentally murdering'-priceless! I'm going to use that! Love It! Well done Nichelle! Hugs~

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

I LOVE this story.  Wow this long chapter was really amazing.  You are doing such a fantastic job with writing it.  Can't wait to see where it goes.  Just happy that Brian & Justin are together.  Love happy endings.  Happy Thanksgiving

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

I LOVE this story.  Wow this long chapter was really amazing.  You are doing such a fantastic job with writing it.  Can't wait to see where it goes.  Just happy that Brian & Justin are together.  Love happy endings.  Happy Thanksgiving

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

What a delight! Justin is a shark and doesn't hesitate to show it. I bet Brian is horny as hell after such demonstration.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

Love the way this panned out.  If the professor tries anything he'll end up in deep shit.

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