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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2019 8:13 pm Title: CHAPTER 45: SHAKE IT OFF

When Karma comes for her pay back she makes sure the champagne is chilled, the food is beyond excellent and she is dressed to kill cause this is her Oscar night and the nominees are going to wish they had never been born.

Every dirty secret scam, scheme, lie is about to come Out and the action doesn't stop until she tells 'That's A Wrap'.

Lindsay his drugs in the storage unit?

DUMBASS!!!

She couldn't plan her way out of an open vault much less a paper bag with holes in it without a screwing that up worse than Michael.

She should just kiss her life goodbye because she won't be out before Gus or the twins have their first child.

Nancy is Hilarious.

Lynette would do well to listen to get her mother and retire her battery operated friend lol

Mel is embracing her future by changing her present to fit the person she not what Lindsay Lindsay made her before.

A new place is a good way to go at a new beginning.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2019 6:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 45: SHAKE IT OFF

Thanks for update

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2019 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY

Did my review three times with this chapter... the last time writing everything out by hand, and not copying from the chapter. WHY are there such wide spaces between sentences?



Author's Response:

LOL! I completely understand, Cathy, since I often have to reformat the chapter after it's posted. In this case though, the posting screen is auto-formatted to double spaced, so when you hit 'return' or 'enter', it double spaces again. Hope this helps! And THANK YOU for all of the reviews! They mean so MUCH! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2019 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 16: CRANES IN THE SKY

"What am I suppose to tell everyone?" Okay folks... we have a very mature adult her.  NOT!


But with the new children, if Brian cuts Lindsay out, where would that leave him? WHAT THE HELL??? They actually think Lindsay should be watching these children? I wouldn't trust her watching a cat, and they're pretty self sufficient.


Glad the boys are together in L.A. ... out of reach from Michael and Lindsay... with no chance of them showing up at the door.


HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2019 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 17: OUT OF TOUCH

I hope we're privy for Daphne and Phoebe's 'talk'. I was hoping for more from Phoebe. I DO hope Ethan doesn't have another one of his 'manic' episodes when he's alone with Daphne. Although I know Daph is not someone you want to mess with, but if 'crazy' makes itself known, she might not be safe.

I could have continued to listen to the smackdown. Hopefully the next chapter gives us the Dastardly Duo's impression of it. Yes, Lindsay should really listen when things are said, as she had just told that she didn't have a pot to piss in. And let's not forget... she didn't even bat an eye ... or comment ... on the fact that she was missing Gus' first steps. BITCH!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2019 9:43 am Title: Chapter 15: POSSESSION OBSESSION: Michael (and others)

Please don't allow Michael t move in with Debbie. Hopefully Vic will be able to talk some sense into her regarding that.

Let's hope Phoebe has some innate goodness about her that her best friend is lacking, and comes forth with what she knows. If all the knowledge they have of Michael and Lindsay's deceit where the babies are concerned, Brian, knowing Michael PAID Ethan to break them up, with JUSTIN's money no less, I think will be the lat straw. Not only that, then after he paid for this to happen, he goes to Brian with this bullshit story how Justin is cheating. And Michael thinks Brian will let him live in the loft with him. Brian needs a restraining order to keep him out!

And Lindsay... don't even get me started n that cuntbitch!  All I can say, is good riddance, Madam! I suppose since ready funds have been cut of for her, she had to bring Gus along on her little excursions. Something tells me her little get-away with Sam tonight might blow up in her face!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2019 5:04 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian

Poor Brian sure has the mantra: As long as he doesn't know, I can live with that... down pat.

So Justin is delusional when it comes to Ethan and his anger and jealousy. He's making a quick exit... stage left... maybe Ethan has some cuts on his hands. But without seeing him, he's not going to know. Damn... where is that security video?

I was going to quit for the night, but well, Mel and Ben just came in... gotta run...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 13: THE BOY IS MINE: Ethan (and others)

I realized after I left my last review that I had still not commented on the pregnancy.

So Lindsay removed two condoms from the trash. We KNOW one is Justin's, as that's the first time he topped Brian after Sap's party. (That's if you are following that line of the show.) And I hardly think Brian left him top him twice that night, so one has to be Brian's.  (BTW... Lindsay's thoughts that morning were vomit worthy)

But will Brian be able to put the timeline of the pregnancy and Lindsay being in his loft at that time. Gosh, I can't believe I can't remember where you go with this storyline! I'm surprised Lindsay wasn't a little bit worried when Brian said he was going to thank Justin for taking out the trash. I mean, what if Brian actually said something to Justin about the fact he emptied the trash can?

Ethan... what a weasel. He's MINE Kinney! Yeah... well, wait until it become knowledge how Lindsay was helping you, Ethan. And like I said,  Video Tape. Run Ethan. Run.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)

Didn't anyone think it strange that Lindsay had Ethan's phone number? I mean, why would Lindsay have Ethan's cell phone number?

Why didn't they kick Michael out of the hospital? Why was there not more shock to Emmett voicing the fact that that was what Michael had said at the Anniversary party? I'm surprised Debbie didn't haul off and WHACK him again at that pronouncement. Timeline must be moved up here as Michael was referred to Novotny-Bruckner. Thank GOD Ben got a clue. Now Michael has no money... where is he going to lay his head?

Jennifer was awfully quiet at the hospital. You would think hearing Michael say those words, she would have hauled off and said or did something.

Ethan better slick off into the sunset. Or preferably Africa. Because when Brian views that video... dun, dun, dun, dunnn....

I wondered WHY Mel thought it necessary to call Lindsay in the first place regarding Justin. She KNEW Lindsay's feelings regarding Justin, so it just does not make any sense to me. Hopefully Lindsay will be joining Michael very soon looking for somewhere to lay her head. Her entitlement issues last chapter made me want to hurl!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

OH FUCKING HELL!!!!  How could I forget such an important part of this story?!?

(maybe because I'm old!) ... good excuse. (I hope.)

Now, thanks to Tag's, The Britin Trap, I remember the term: Superfecundation. BUT. due to the fact I have NO medical training, just because both Michael (and another male) donated sperm, does this GUARANTEE that they will both be biological fathers? or could the same sperm impregnate both eggs?  And how does Michael intend for Lindsay to not claim parental rights once the babies are born? I see flaws in his planning! (just saying!) And when the hell is Ben going to find out about the embezzlement?

I used the term: another male. I don't believe for a minute you would subject us to Brian being the father along side Michael and Lindsay. Is it Justin's? Did Brian let someone else top him? Or, to use another of Deb's plot bunnies, did Brian allow someone to use his loft at some point?

The last thing... what the hell did Debbie mean by: Why shouldn't Brian have the same? The answer when it hit me, made me angrier than I think I have ever been at Michael before.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 9- TEENAGE SENSATION: Brian

Fucking Michael!

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 11:15 am Title: Chapter 7: DIRTY LITTLE SECRET

Okay, seriously... WHY didn't you just have Daphne tell that 'blind-as-a-bat' Phoebe to get out?!  Daphne and Justin SHOULD NOT be talking about stuff like that in front of her!! I can almost bet money she will let something slip to Ethan. She probably Has said stuff to him in the past that Daphne and Justin have said. And best friend or not... You can STILL tell when someone is full of bullshit, which Ethan IS!! Nobody can be THAT blind!!!

I could literally kiss Emmett (well, of course I would love to) for opening Debbie's eyes. I hope she stays wide awake too. 200k! He wouldn't need to buy a house WITH Ben, I know he could have bought one himself with that amount of money. And for Christ sakes aloud! WHy would anyoneneed a COMIC SHOP to look THAT regal and uscale??? That's almost like a slap in the face to Deb. It's like he's trying to be better than what he grew up in. AGAIN... COMIC SHOP!!!  But, well.. hehe ... I don't think he will have to worry about affording a house to live with Ben. I don't think Ben will be sticking around when he learns Michael stole 200k from Justin. Oh! It didn't escape my notice that Michael did not say he bought 'collectibles' with some of the money, too.

If Lindsay wants to know what is in the contract so badly, why not just ask Michael if she can see it? You know, play it off as "I just want to help you understand"... type of thing. Kudos goes to Melanie. I don't care if she would have stuck her tongue out at Lindsay, Lindsay and Michael are still more immature. Is it wrong for me to wish that Lindsay would have at least attempted to draw one panel?  And aw yes... Lindsay DOES NOT have the talent even close to what Justin has.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 8:26 am Title: Chapter 6: LOVE CHANGES: Brian

Hey! It's meeeee....

it seems I'm on a "let's reread all of Nichelle's stories" kick. I know I have not read the last few chapters that were posted of this story, as I didn't remember it well enough to know what was going on. 

I DEFINITELY didn't remember about the screwing out of the RAGE profits. But yet I remember Justin holding all copyright to his artwork. Weird how your mind filters certain things about a story. Hmm... down the line I do know what happens when Ron and nancy purchase said artwork... but I think that's where I quit reading.

Well, just to touch on the ending of this chapter...

PLEASE... send Ethan to some remote island. Get him away from Justin. As much as I 'love to hate' Michael and Lindsay, I am loathe of Ethan. That guy makes my skin crawl. There is something about his character that rubs me the wrong way. Totally different from how Dumb and Dumber do. Ethan makes me Cringe. Just his: No, Justin is mine and anything that stands in the way of us being together, has to be removed at all cost and that includes his friends. I'll have to see to it.  Makes me want to crash my computer so I don't have to see and read his name anymore. Lord I just shivered.

Enjoying this immensely...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 7:54 am Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

cannot wait for update

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 7:52 am Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

so glad for Brian, Justin and Mel.  All the other s Micheal, Lindsey etc can go to hell

Hope they do not let Debbie into their lives

Story sounded familiar and relized I did read it and bookmarked at Archive ofourown.  But only there it stopped at chapter 43

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2019 3:12 am Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

WEnt back and reread the last 4-5 chapters and it really jelled for me.  I remembered the rest of the story but the last few had so much new information and reveals I had to get a better grip on it.  Love that Brian has one child that is his and Justin has one too.  Not sure how the co=parenting will go but it will be interesting.  I can't wait for the trials of dumb and dumber.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2019 5:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

Yes one thing about Brian and Justin is that when the mood suits them they never hold back and afterwards they are full with more clarity.

A place but enough for four adults and three kids would be perfect cause it allows them all to co-parent while also giving everyone space when they need it, plus with Princess Cruella dripping poison in each other's ears they can develop the friendship they should have years ago, Mel is seeing for the first time that there was nothing to be jealous of Brian isn't a curious kid or bisexual so Lindsay never stood a chance of getting Brian in her bed again.

Mel is seeing that Brian isn't to blame for her insecurities it was Lindsay and her games plus her constant need for attention.

I also think making sure Deb doesn't have a way to come over and constantly badger Brian, Justin and Melanie as the trials move closer, Deb has to learn that her actions helped to contribute to Michael's behavior long before Brian came in the picture, she just conditioned everyone else to do the same so she could have peace, now there is no one to protect her from this fallout and there is no safety net to clean up this mess.

Of course my money is on Grandma Jenn putting Deb in her place while wearing fabulous shoes or at least setting them aside and if Daphne is aro find too then all bets are off lol

Thanks for the Update :)

 

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2019 2:42 am Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

No holding back indeed. As far as possible from trouble twins. Seeing How Micheal is, hope Deb not give them trouble. Excited to read what happen next...

Thankyou for update. H&Kss:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2019 1:09 am Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

Love the plan for the living arrangements.  Now to wait for what you plan for next.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2019 11:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

Great update.  Hope all is well with you.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2019 8:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2

Re-reading the story over again I laughed cause Lindsay is going to blow a gasket when she finds out her parents are very accepting of Melanie, Brian, Justin and everyone else but not her.

And that Ronald, Nancy, Jennifer and Brian's real father will be grandparents to Jennifer Renee Taylor-Kinney, Jordan Raymond Taylor-Kinney and Gus Marcus Taylor-Kinney and Lynette will enjoy being Aunt to them.

Plus how Melanie will enjoy being Mommy to all three kids while Lindsay  will be nothing but the incubator for Gus and the donor Little Jenn and Jordan.

Plus Michael's reaction when the finds out that he has no ties to the babies and the money he shelled out went to help Lindsay lol

Deb like Michael expects instant forgiveness for her her cruel behavior and hateful words but right now Brian and Justin are not in the mood to placate het, especially when like Michael she only means I'm sorry until the next crisis involving Michael pops up.

Deb is still trying to figure out out to save Michael while also keeping everyone under her thumb and until she really admits that everything she said and felt towards Brian and Justin is true she can't heal anything.

Her love like Michael's halo is fickle and only serves her and Michael that is why no one is coming to get rescue cause this time Deb has to save herself and she also has to learn that putting Michael's needs and demands above everyone else means that she had to face the consequences not  bury her head in the sand.

 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2019 12:27 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2

Love it.  Cant wait for update

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 5:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2

Yeah!!! They must feel ecstatic! Justin more than Brian who already has a kid. How a bad situation gives them so blinding smiles and knowing how Lindsay is going to be hysterical is the best reward.

Debbie is just too deep into Michael's protection that she can't help herself and has to find more excuses. She really needs to take some hours off and think of what Vic told her.

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 4:06 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2

This my kind of soon WOOHOO!   Yes Debbie finally truly seeing what an evil shit  Mikey is and how much she's lost 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 3:09 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2

So Brian has a girl and Justin has a boy.  Instant family.  Love that things are clearer as to the parentage of the children and that Craig will not be able to get to them.  Should be an interesting continuation of the story with them raising them.  ( hint, hint)-  I like the perspective of Vic telling the story.  Great that Mel is willing to help the guys and be the mom figure.

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