Date: Feb 26, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
Road trip on memory lane...
Date: Jan 07, 2017 1:49 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad they stopped Justin before he could get to Michael.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 15
That last communication between Justin and Brian was beautiful
Date: Oct 24, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ohhhhhhhhhh. Oh my oh my.....I have the feeling things are going to go ALL bad for Lindsey, Michael and Deb. and not just the usual "all bad" but monumental explosive, apocolyptically bad!! Linsey/Liddy knowing all along where Justin was...Michael hitting him. Lindsey and now Deb knowing about it!! they'll be lucky to only get jail time! I can'twait for the gang to find out about everything. they are on the brink of it...so close I can taste it, but they need real evidence, not just suspicion. Thank goodness for Max. I so love his character! Whata hoot! A great partner for Emmett too. Love his idea about Sam and Lindsey. You know, a tiny part of me almost feels bad for those 3, but then I give my head a shake. Mad and Justin together are pretty formidable adn have enough influence to make the 3 amigos's lives miserable. those 2 along with the combined brain, influence and ability to scheme from the rest!! WOW. Adn can I just say..pissed off Mel. Oh shit. Would not want to mess with that!!
Max was right about Mel and Gus though. As much as Ted is friends with Mel, it takes a real friend to point out when they are fucking up and not just excuse their behavior. Good for Emmett for sayingwhat right.
It's getting so exciting! Every chapter has new nuggets of info. It really is a thril ride this one!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:00 am Title: Chapter 15
I don't make a habit of reviewing everything I read, because frankly sometimes it can be hard to come up a positive spin. (Characters being tooOOC, or there is no real developments of said characters) No such problem with your work😀. I cannot wait for this story to finish so I can download the ePub, to keep for a rainy day. I love that Justin is remembering. I love that Max told Mel to get off her ass and be Gus' mother, I loved "Take Charge Ted". I love the fierce daddies both Brian and Justin. In essence I am LOVING this story!
Date: Oct 23, 2016 7:27 am Title: Chapter 15
YIPPEEE!! Dyno-Dyke is on board! And the implication that Lindsay's ignorant ass has been covering for Michael is well and truly out there! Now that Max has an idea of who the players are, he'll know just how to follow the money.
I really loved the semi-confrontation between Mel and Max. Like Emmett and Justin, Max can see through bullshit. I love Ted but all he can really see is that his friend was hurting during all this. But Em and Max see the whole picture. I really hope that Mel takes Max's words to heart. Although I can understand the amount of pain she was in, it wasn't caused by Gus. I think in the long run she'll make a real go at restoring her relationship with her son.
Brian and Justin...Ahhhh what can I say aout those two. They are definitely two sides of the same coin! I'm glad they are going to the loft. Perhaps being there in the place where the sage of Brian Kinney and JUstin Taylor began will jog Justin's memory and complete the puzzle the Justin is still trying to understand.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 3:16 am Title: Chapter 15
Yet another wonderful chapter. What will Max think when he finds out Brian calls Mel-Smelly Melly? Now they are suspecious of Michael and if Max's plan works the cops will take care of everything.