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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 17

The dynamic duo, Daphne and Justin, is on a mission. They got some info and put some pressure on Deb and her son.

Glad to see Brian put his foot down with Max.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 17

That was very childish but also soooo good. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:32 am Title: Chapter 17

Captain Astro needs a funeral, Mikey will be more upset about losing that than his own daughter 

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 3:32 am Title: Chapter 17

Love what Justin did with the comic book can't wait to see his reaction. Payback time. 

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 2:48 am Title: Chapter 17

Shame Michael he's such a dick

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 1:14 am Title: Chapter 17

Two new updates Fantastic!  Can't get enough of your fics.

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 17

Justin had to regulate...lol he is awesome and fierce, I'm loving it.  Deb and Co. are so out gunned it's crazy.  Daphne is a ride or die friend which is good for Justin but that much worse for tacky trio.

That was an excellent ending to Capt. Astro. Can't wait til Mikey gets the pieces.

This was a fast paced intense and funny update. Thanks!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 17

So much accomplished.  You let us in on why the detective Brian hired never reported anything.  That's one PI who's about to lose his license I bet.  And you hit Michael where it will really hurt.  Destroying his prized possession.  Good job.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 17

Justin/Jay was smart to go talk to Deb he got the information he needed so now all the players will get theirs right between the eyes.

Brian having that conversation with Max is something I wish had happened on the tv show, everyone spent so much time meddling in Brian and Justin's relationship they had no time for their own, it is easy to dictate how one should act in a relationship when your own is falling apart or you never had one in the last thirty years.

Tearing up the comic book is going to destroy Michael and like Justin I am cracking up it is just the start of what Michael deserves.

They should be running out of town but Deb and Michael are going to stay thinking that they still have control of the situation, witnessing their downfall will be glorious and the start of Brian and Justin putting the past behind them and moving forward into their future.

I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 17

Deb and Michael have no idea who they are dealing with in Justin/Jay. He is too damn much!!! LMAO!! This is the one time I'm super happy of Michael's oral diarrhea! Justin played their asses like a piano and got the twit to sing like the proverbial canary. Deb won't be able to help her baby backpeddle out of this one!

The conversation with Max and Brian was one that definitely had to happen. I'm glad that Brian acknowledged the core issue between him and Justin- lack of one-on-one communication. Between Brian's standoffishness and the others meddling, I understand why Justin was confused about his place in Brian's world. Don't like it at all but I certainly understand it. I'm glad that Justin is willing to try again and asked Max for the space to do so. Is it wrong for me to want them to live at Justin's place? Deb, Michael and Hunka Burning Drawers aka Lindsay doesn't know where it is and while Brian and Justin are working on being a family, they will need some place that can represent peace and normalcy for the kids. If not there just some place else to give them time to regroup. I have a feeling that once Justin sends that comic (which YES, i laughed hysterically while reading), I have a feeling that Deb and Michael will start inducing the drama full-force again. 

WRITE On Star!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 17

OMG!!! That was PERFECT! I hope you show Michael's reaction. That is going to hurt worse than any prison time or other punishment anyone can dish out. I LOVE THIS JUSTIN, I cannot say that enough. 

Most times in this fandom you get protective Brian and abused Justin. This Justin, I would be afraid to cross in a dark alley and I like that😉.  

 

Keep this up, I am loving this story!

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