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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2020 9:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

I love when Brian is pushing boundaries and this quote is so typical: "You like bananas, right? And when you’re older, you can play with a whole different kind of banana, but this isn’t it.".

Knowing how Emmett can queen out, I imagine how he is now, ready to become a father.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 10:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

ahhhh...like a breath of fresh air in these troubling times comes your fanfiction.  

I'm a happy girl, off to read.

bec

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 9:32 am Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

Thanks for upate

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 5:35 am Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

Long time no see.  Great chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 3:46 am Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

A fine web you weave...

I have to wonder if Virginia is aware Brian DOESN'T have to marry to inherit. I'm almost thinking she is, and that's why she's hellbent on getting the documents. So, the big question, is what is the deal with the Peterson's, and just why does she want the union between Brian and Lindsay? There must be a side deal there or something... or maybe blackmail of some sort.

And maybe I'm thinking too hard...

But, good job, Frankie... you spoiled their underhanded maneuvers.

The Schickle residence will be a good place to stay while in Pittsburgh... because other than the hospital, they will be unattainable there.

Can you imagine John and Peter's impression of the Schickle Mansion? I can just picture the wide-eyed wonder.

And Emmett's going to be a daddy soon! Is he in the delivery room? I hope they have smelling salts close by.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 2:02 am Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

Good thing Brian, Justin, Melanie, Daphne and the kids are coming back because everyone needs to talk about all the revelations and strategize how to use it to make everyone suffer who harmed them.

The kids being at The Schickle Residence after they find out what is going on will give them time to digest what is happening.

Plus in a house that big it will be easy to hide for a days before they have to travel back to Florida with all the information.

Good thing everyone is meeting at the hospital cause everyone might need oxygen beside Emmett lol

Why is Virginia so desperate to have Brian married to Lindsay especially if can be proved that Joan is not and never was Brian's biological mother?

What is that cow up to?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 1:17 am Title: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED

Yes love this.

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