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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2021 2:24 pm Title: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN

OMG - BUT I HAVE MISSED THIS! So, so good!!

Lindsay telling Nancy fibs - doesn't she realize the TRUTH wil come out? "Gardner and I decided..." More like, Gardner laid the law down, even after you begged and cooed.

And if either of them think Nathan is going to help them... Well, you just made me LMAO! Ooh, do let us hear them ask and try to cajole the help from him! I will want popcorn for that! It should be entertaining.

“If you have an emergency, please dial 911.” WAY TO GO, RONALD! And why do I have a feeling Nancy is about BROKE? 6k isn't going to last long at the Hilton.

Mikey, Mikey, Mikey - you are persona non grata. Do everybody a favor and leave. Because even if Brian or Justin can't come near you - doesn't mean there's not at least twenty other Liberty Avenue people willing to don dark ski masks and do the job themselves. And I'm very curious about his last statement about what Lindsay does with the EXTRA money from Brian. But - fun could be had for all (except Mikey) if he shows up at what he assumes is Mel and Linds' house! LOL.

I'm going to have to go back and read a little on those conditions on the inheritance because I was thinking about how Joan got the inheritance if Brian married her choice. But since Brian isn't Joan's - will that matter? If I get stuck, I may come hollering... be prepared! LOL

Good Chapter - and thank you so much for finding the time to bring this to us!

HUGS,

Cathy

 

Reviewer: anjul02 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2021 10:43 am Title: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN

Thank you for the update! I really love this story. Can't way to see how Nancy and Joan react. 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2021 6:00 am Title: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN

thanks for update

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2021 9:54 am Title: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN

Brian is smart enough to let Justin and Melanie deal with Joan and he is a Genius to divide his inheritance between Melanie, John and Peter because it gives Melanie financial clout to fight against Lindsay while also helping to provide financial security for Gus as he gets older from all three of his parents.

Hope Gardner enjoys having both Nancy and Lindsay squawking in his ear as they plan and plot, too bad someone wasn't recording  Lindsay and Nancy's conversation it would sound very impressive in court?

Michael like his mother feels everyone should ask his permission to breath it is just too bad he can't think without tripping over a Pebble, getting knocked on his ass must have hurt his brain since he is used to sitting on his brain to come up with a coherent thought.

He is going to wish he had stayed under his mommy's tit by the time they get through with him lol

This is going to be good for some and humiliating for others 😂

Thanks for the Update😃

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2021 2:07 am Title: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN

Thank you for the update :)

Can't wait to read when Joan will be awake and how she will react.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2021 8:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN

Yessssss! Updated! 🥰 lindsey and Nancy need to get a life on a planet far far away. I could just see Michael getting moved out of the way. Loved it! Great writing !

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