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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:41 am Title: CHAPTER 24: A MEETING OF THE MINDS

FINALLY ... I got caught up on this. I have been so busy what with the holiday, my mother's birthday, WRITING, (yes, believe it or not, my first story), that this kind of got forgotten. Remembering I had a couple WIP's to catch up on, I went searching through the stories.  Anyways.......

This was a good update. We learned of the inner-workings of the futher staff of Kinnetik, and their plans for Gardner. I always get a kick when Todd is brought into a story. I haven't read many with him, but the reaction is always the same. Backroom Todd? *smirk*

So Nancy's little plan to have the P.I. get information about Brian and Mel, is going to blow up in her face. I wonder if she didn't have the money to pay for the files, or if Hanks wasn't able to get ahold of Nancy, so he called Ron instead. Regardless, Nancy doesn't get the information, but Ron will. Because I have no doubt that Ron will pay for them, if only to see what Nancy wanted. And just HOW did Ron know about Mel and Brian?

We haven't heard from Michael since he fell and hit his head on the table, (that was such a shame - NOT) I gotta wonder how he's faring. Hopefully with his head connecting with the table it's caused memory failure.

Is it 5:00 yet? Has Lindsay made it home? If not, she may be dumpster diving to have a change of clothes.

Will we get the lowdown on how Rudyard is faring at the farm? I laugh just at the thought of that. I wonder who will come up with the most dreadful chores he can do. Molly or Fred?

Thanks for all your updates you give us.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 6:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: A MEETING OF THE MINDS

Hanks can be paid for the information he has collected and get a bonus to give Nancy false information, I am sure everyone in that room would be willing to pay for him to go on vacation in style to get their hands on what he has gathered for Turnstile Nancy.

It would be a good idea to lead Nancy, Lindsay, Gardner and their cohorts on a merry chase  that ends with their destruction.

Sounds like Brian and Justin have very loyal people willing to follow them to Unimaginable Heights of Success.

Lynette is making plans to be more than a socialite she is going to be a better mother and wife than Nancy, plus a better daughter, mother and woman than Nancy or Lindsay could ever be on a good day.

Perhaps The Hobbs Family want Brian and Justin to take it all?

Brian and Justin have quite an Army watching the backs, fronts and sides together they will be Unstoppable.

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 1:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: A MEETING OF THE MINDS

Always nice to see more on this.  So much going on.  Looking forward to more soon.

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