Date: Jan 02, 2023 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
This was a great story and I was hooked from the start. As the story progressed and more things started coming out, Kip was on my list as well as one of the suspects and I'm glad he was caught.
Author's Response: I love mystery stories, so I'm glad you enjoyed what I wrote.
Date: Apr 14, 2022 4:27 am Title: Chapter 10
Mikey is such a weenie….still acts like a high school kid
Author's Response: You got that right.
Date: Aug 04, 2017 7:33 am Title: Chapter 15
I really liked the ending. Especially because it's not a perfect scenario you left us with. It makes the whole story more real. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Date: Aug 04, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Well, Justin and his ass can be very persuasive.
Author's Response: Yes they can!!!!
Date: Aug 04, 2017 6:50 am Title: Chapter 13
If Kip lost his job because Chase went to Brian for a new campaign that would be more than enough reason to try to ruin him.
Author's Response: For sure.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ted really is great help. Brian is lucky to have him on his team.
Author's Response: Ted makes a good friend.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
Somehow I hope that Jack cheated. I think it would be nice for Brian to have a brother. Also the interaction between him and Joan was surprising but in a good way.
Author's Response: Glad you think so.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
This was the perfect way to get Michael of his back.
Author's Response: Glad you think so.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
The fact that Brian is talking about his half brother with Ted probably means that he wants to explore that part of his life. I think that would be great.
Author's Response: It would be.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Kip Thomas is a possibility but I have a feeling that it might be someone that nobody would ever think about doing something like this.
Author's Response: You could be right.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
So Brian will finally know why Kip dropped the law suit. His reaction will be interesting.
Author's Response: Yes it will.
Date: Aug 03, 2017 10:56 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm really glad Brian has no problem with Justin helping out financially. Also I hope he finds the guts to contact Chase. It might be just what he needs.
Author's Response: This Brian is able to accept help.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think identity theft is something very personal. I wouldn't wish this on anyone.
Author's Response: I agree. It's horrible.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian's days seem to be getting worse.
Author's Response: Yes they do.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad Brian told Justin about his problems. That's a good sign for their relationship.
Author's Response: So different from the show.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG This really sucks. It must be someone close to Brian.
Author's Response: Could be.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
There are so many questions in my head right now. I'm going to read the next chapter. Maybe I will get some answers. Great start
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 15
Great story!!! Well built and written, interesting plot, funny stuff and some hot scenes.
Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for all your comments. I enjoy reading them.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
What kind of kick ass party Michael is planning? Every party he organized was a flop.
Author's Response: LOL Too true.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
Kip Thomas, he could be behind all this. He lost 2 jobs because of Brian and this is kind of what he could do to destroy him financially.
Author's Response: He is certainly a possibility.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
I laughed so hard when I read what Gus said to his bully. He is picking some good stuff from Mel and Brian and he's very smart.
Author's Response: Thanks for all your great comments. I'm not sure about the stains. Gus is a very bright little boy.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Baby Brian: I'm sure Justin would melt if he was able to see the pictures.
Author's Response: Quite likely.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael has his dose of Brian. He still thinks Justin will leave.
Author's Response: That was always Michael's hope.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
I always wondered how they were dealing with the stains they might leave quite everywhere they had sex on. Sorry to ask, but with the hot scene in Brian's office, I had this on my mind.
Author's Response: LOL Good point.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
If Chase looks a lot like Brian, he could easily steal his identity. But, what would be his motive?
Author's Response: Hmm.