Date: May 23, 2021 11:14 am Title: Chapter 25 - Finale
diid read it again
Date: Apr 16, 2020 1:27 am Title: Chapter 25 - Finale
did read it again.. Love it
Author's Response: It's nice to see that you thought the story was worth reading again. Thanks.
Date: Jan 28, 2019 2:46 am Title: Chapter 25 - Finale
another great story. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Jan 28, 2019 12:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Poor Brian. That Janet is a bitch, she should work in a morge
Author's Response: Good suggestion for Janet's employment. lol
Date: Dec 02, 2018 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Finale
I thought this story was great! So different from any I’ve read. It was nice to read a story with Iran and Justin as the focus without the interference of anyone in the “gang”. I loved the ending.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your lovely comment.
Date: Jan 08, 2018 9:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Im sorry im a bit confused. Is brian writing a story or is he trying to describe what happen before the attack? Ps : English is not my 1st language
Author's Response: It's a bit of both. Sorry to confuse you.
Date: Jan 08, 2018 8:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Ewww that amanda is creepy
Author's Response: Definitely.
Date: Jan 08, 2018 8:22 am Title: Chapter 2
At least he start to accept his condition
Author's Response: He doesn't want to accept it, but he has no other choice.
Date: Jan 08, 2018 7:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow poor brian. I hope police catch that bad guy
Author's Response: That would be good.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 1:28 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Finale
Amazing story!!! Hot, creepy, emotional... All good ingredients for a captivating journey!
Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting. The story is kind of creepy in a good way. LOL
Date: Feb 19, 2017 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 24
Drums are rolling... Evil cliffhanger! Will Justin realize what is happening?
Author's Response: Read on to find out.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 23
The words Brian didn't want to hear/say; how will he manage that?
Author's Response: Who knows. LOL
Date: Feb 19, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 22
The second cop could be the suspect, or is it Trent that is playing with Brian?
Author's Response:
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:56 am Title: Chapter 21
I hope Carver is not the murderer...
Author's Response: Wait and see.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:47 am Title: Chapter 20
The murderer against the stalker: at least Brian is still alive, but is he safe?
Author's Response: Interesting choice.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 19
It's strange that Mickey hasn't been around; it's not his usual habits to stay away for that long.
Author's Response: True.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:12 am Title: Chapter 18
I hope Brian never saw the kind of scene Jason/Jackson was in; I hope it's just the writer wild imagination and human cruelty that gives him matter for his book.
Author's Response: Imagination can be a powerful thing.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 10:49 am Title: Chapter 17
This is getting spookier... It reminds me of "Wait Until Dark" with Audrey Hepburn. Unfortunately, the loft can never be completely dark, except when there are clouds and no street lights outside.
Author's Response: Glad that the spookiness is coming through.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:51 am Title: Chapter 16
The teasing is getting heavy: how long will Brian be able to resist?
Author's Response: Not long.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:08 am Title: Chapter 15
Is the dark slowly going away?
Author's Response: Hope so.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 7:57 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh yeah, kissing lessons... So hot
Author's Response: Glad you think so.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 13
Evil cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Of course.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 7:30 am Title: Chapter 12
At least the police knows.
Author's Response: Yes.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 7:17 am Title: Chapter 11
When the reality crashes the dream...
Author's Response: Not fun.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 7:03 am Title: Chapter 10
The whiner appears and the good mood is gone.
Author's Response: LOL. Too true.