Date: Aug 28, 2018 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. Just know that this is going to be a good story.
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great story! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I love how Brian surprised Justin. I can't wait for his reaction when Brian arrives. Mel wants to have a baby with Justin? I'm not sure what to feel about that.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank You for once again for another GREAT story :)
Off to catch up on the other one.
~~Hugs~~
Teresa
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations on finishing yet another story. You are amazing! Keep on writing! TAG
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 2:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Another triumph! Thank you for sharing. And the pic of Jasmine and Bella, sooo cute!
Date: Jan 06, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the intro chapter... the reflections from each of them (except Justin)
did not see that mel would be the friend who wanted the baby... from the summary, I wasn't even sure which guy was the one... I figured Daphne asking Justin or Lindsay asking Brian again...
can't wait to read more... write quickly please... lol
Date: Dec 28, 2016 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for all the great story you do.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:17 am Title: Chapter 1
To be honest, I find this icky. Three different baby daddies in one family? It's a wishy washy as the girls were in cannon so I'll buy it but it's still icky.
Aww Brian and the boxes is too cute.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2016 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Love your descriptions of each character and seeing where they are. Then you get to the meat of your story which I like. Now you leave us with Mel wanting Justin to father a child with her? That's a storyline I can get behind.
Date: Dec 18, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I would have loved to see Justin's face while opening the boxes.
Mel's request could be fun to follow.
Great beginning!