Date: Jan 03, 2018 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Craig and Zeus together: I feel the angst growing. Brian is going to get really mad and will do all he can to protect Justin.
Date: Jun 25, 2017 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
At least they know to expect something bad to come.
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 5
I forgot to say how much I like the Thomas and Kiki parts from the last chapter. And now we have Luther with his daughter-in-law and someone else? Good thing Xanthe has enough scruples to leave Luther high and dry and give one of the brothers a call. With four brothers all starting with Z I'm getting them confused. Zeon is allergic to appricots? At least Zee managed to keep him from eating. The messy feast sounded mouthwatering.
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahhh...Craig and Luther won't know what him them
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Had to laugh with regards to Xanthe. score 1 for the girl. Now....I'm wondering how long before Talon figures stuff out. Will she follow the same course as Xanthe or will she stick by her money maker?
As for Nancy and Ronald.Oh dear lordy......When will those 2 learn?!! They've been screwed over enough by Lindsey, yet their first instinct is to throw money as soon as she cries for help. Once they realized, it was too late. How many more times will it take for them to just STOP?? I want to smack them up side the head Debbie style.
Luther and Craig in cahoots is no surprise. Luther kind of reminds me of Trump. So incredibly narcissistic that he assumes he can do anything without any repercussions. That whatever rules he creates, must be followed by everyone EXCEPT himself. He can do whatever and whoever he wants. That people wouldn't DARE go up against him, and if they do....they'll pay. Sadly, it's typical school yard bullying bullshit. Hypocritical and entitlement issues in abundance. In the end, they will get what's coming to them. Craig on the otherhand, is simply the bullies sidekick. A bit player real;ly. He'll go down faster than Luther I would imagine. I highly doubt he has any idea what he'll be up against when he tries to take on Justin, Brian, Jen and all the rest. He'll take teh fall long before Luther does I'm sure. Like the typical bully though, Luther will hang him out to dry just to save his own ass. It's going to be such fun watching Luther, Craig and whoever else go down.
Lindsey and Michael thuse far are pretty much still blips. I assume they also will get involved with Luther and Craig. That should be fun. lol. They aren't intelligent enough to take on the RTOAF. They also stupid enought to think that Luther would "look after them" if they side with him. Please...the man would throw them under the bus before either of them could even blink.
The intrigue in this third part is and is going to be fantastic!! A real cat and mouse game to see who is in the forefront. Seems that Zee's, Zeus's and Zeon's connections will serve them well though and will hopefully keep them one step ahead.
Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!! Very exciting!! Oh I can't wait for more!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh it should be interesting when all of them face each other....Luther doesn't know that his enemies is step ahead of his game,thanks to Xanthie..But i'm really worried about JustinðŸ˜Just hoping he can overcome facing Hobbs and Craig again with the help of the family specially Brian..
Zee was so sweet and adorable when she's angry to Zeon but risk like everything just for him not to get hurt🤗🤗
Thanks for updating😚
Date: Jan 09, 2017 4:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Boy, you have all the villans in this one, hope they ALL get their arses kicked to HELL.
Fabulous!
Thank for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 1:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Luther is going to wish he had stayed in bed...in Siberia
Starks are talking and that is not good for Luther and his idiot cohorts.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 5
Luther is such a Hypocrite!!
Neither Talon or Xanthe are pure black yet it is okay for him to sleep with them, man I want to punch that man in his smug, arrogant face.
At least the family can see Craig and Chris coming this time so no one will be blindsided, does Luther plan for Lindsay to get involved with Zee's ex cause I doubt she will pay to tear the apart and he deserves what he gets for even being seen with Lindsay.
So Luther is only a millionaire (More like way shy of a billion right?) and he is giving money to Craig how will the RTOAF deal with that information?
Zee, Zeus and Zeon are in the same room the next chapter is going to be very interesting.
Author's Response:
I was thinking he is more along the lines of an arrogant misogynistic fuckwit!
Oh RTOAF are going to deal big time...and 3 Zs become 5....