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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2018 3:57 am Title: Chapter 31

The end is hilarious.

Lindsey is just starting to work and she's already unsatisfied: that's promising for the future.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2017 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 31

I hope for Matt and Hunter that their "dads" won't do anything stupid. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 31

YOu know, you'd think that after all this time, Michael would get some sort of clue as to how to behave. That perhaps this self imposed pedestal really asn't workign for him. but does he? Nooooooooooo. He's stil treating people like they are all below him. Little does he realize that all of them have more class in their pinkie toe that he has in hsi entire being. I seriously want to reach through the computer screen and throttle him. Sadly many have tried, but to no avail. It would simply make ME feel better. lol.

When is someone going to tell Lindsey and Grady about what he's been doing to the condoms? (or will they?) Not only do they have to be concerned about pregnancy, but STD's. Especially considering that Grady is double dipping!!

Craig got a fitting sentence. Especially his community service! OH my that must've chaffed his ass!! LOL!! the fact that his store has been taken over, is being gutted and revamped, and will undeoubtedly be incredibly successful will just be icing on teh cake!

speaking of chaffed asses......the reception?? LMFAO!!! WOW! that couldn'e have gone any better! That she was introduced to Hunter as someone "to be so young adn talented..."  THEN, she sees the ring on Matt's finger! That Sidney basically ignored her, and that everyone else was getting introduced to the more important people. Let's not forget the fact that she was being led around like a puppy by her boss. OH wat a marvelous evening!!

On a side not...I'd so love Faal and Brian to shop online for me!! 

sorry for some missed reviews. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 



Author's Response:

Welcome gack I missed you.  Glad you're still reading.

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 31

I can see why Lindsay is seeing what she once liked about Michael as a hindrance now since she wants back in the wasp set, but she coddled this whiny baby and now has to deal with the consequences.

I knew she wasn't done with trying to get her place back in the family it was just that she got to New York and was distracted by Talon and Bethany who were feeding into her ego, one to play her against Michael and the other to be superior.

Man is she going to be floored when she finds out what Michael is up to and why Grady is with her.

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2017 6:10 am Title: Chapter 31

First thing,what is Zeon gave to Lydia??

 

Hahhaa Medea,i'm.picturing Madea from the movie,cause she sure is would scare the whiny brat..And Lindsay,ooh I  thought she finally learned her lesson,but apparently still not..She still the same as before,never felt sorry or guilty of what she's done with the family..Now thet she has a job again,seems to think it's her way to get back to the family..So sad to see it will all go to waste..Specially when Grady kick her to the curb when he didn't get what he's supposed to get as if there is to begin with from Zee or Faal..And Lindsay the moment she saw the rings,the green eye monster in her suddenly reappear and the jealousy surfaces..And the whiny brat,i wonder what he's planning to do about Hunter and Matt now??

 

Yaaaay my wished finally granted,Zeus and Cynthia,i'm sure they could be another power couple in Business world,both intiligent and hardworking and never took anything for granted...😍😍😍

 

Now theres just Zander and Zeph left,looking for a lovelife..Hoping you can come up for a partner for them MsMerlot...

 

Great chapter as always,Thanks for sharing.😘 



Author's Response:

It was a painting that was in the house in Paris.  I made up the name of the artist.

Since you asked so nicely will see what I can do for the other brothers....

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2017 3:31 am Title: Chapter 31

This chapter is coming out fine.  It's good that Justin was able to get Zeus to take over management of Taylor Electronics.  His ideas are great.  Lindsay is changing for the better so that leaves Michael as being the shit.  Opps seems I've misjudged Lindsay.  The bitch is coming back.  Now what's this about Brian and Faal buying a villa in Italy while looking for a pasta machine?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 31

Michael thinks if Lindsay gets pregnant he will be taken care of?

Where The Hell Did He Come Up With That?? He is channeling his inner Lindsay with that thought process.

Boy did Grady get real upset when he found out Matt and Hunter are married, his first thought was about the money, Lindsay was envious about their wedding bands and Michael could care less.

Medea, Gerald and Jason are cracking me up with their interactions with whiny Michael.

Luther is going to cry when he hears about what Zee did to his former condo, clothes, jewelry I hope he cries.

I know Craig is crying with the sentence he got he could have tried for some compassion but he would rather show the judge how much of an Ass he really is, so I hope he enjoys prison because his cellmates are going to enjoy meeting him.

Cynthia and Zeus??? 

Brian and Faal buy a house and Zee is going to chase them down the street with a meat cleaver rofl

Fantastic Chapter :)

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