Date: May 23, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 68
The beginning was hot as hell!
The middle was a prof that Brian is really over with Michael.
The end is horrifying and as you recommended, the brain bleach is mandatory: what a video to watch!
Jenny got a key to a great career: good for her and for her parents!
Date: Jun 30, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 68
I think Jenny would be great as a lawyer. Also I definitely need that brain bleach.
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2017 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 68
That was disgusting!!!
Michael is such a Idiot!!!
Brian handled himself with smoothness and class he was able to put Michael in his place with complete ease.
The jury can see how big of a moron Michael is but that video did not help <shudders>, Michael really should have read what was handed to him cause his incompetence is growing every second.
Next up his Justin and this is going to be good for Justin but Michael is going to wish he had taken the deal.
I feel bad Lindsay wasn't there to see how Michael handled Brian on the stand it was very eye opening and nauseating.
Good for Jenny to get such an amazing opportunity Ben, Mel and Steve are going to be so proud as soon as they get over the shock :)
On the edge of my seat for the next update :)
Date: Apr 11, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 68
Holy shitballs girl! Unfortuately I read this at about midnight just before I turned my lights off. Dear lord...*shudders* Not a visual I expected before bed. lol. I do however appreciate the warning. I was somewhat prepared....just not fully. eeeeeeeeek! LOL!!
Brian was great today. Michael was..........a complete and utter moron. (I apologize ot all morons out there for defiling you) I mean...can a guy be any more stupid? he just has NO clue what so ever. Love teh judge though! She's great, and I love how she's always putting him in his place. He doesn't even look at evidence given to him?! Really?!?
I enjoy ever time you write how he turns pale. LOL. Always a great visual and you just know that he's going to do something completely idiotic. (again, I apologize to all idiots)
Immensely proud of our pitbull Jenny! What an experience she's going to have.
So who's up next? Justin? Oh, well now....that should be interesting! Michael thinks he's going to put Justin into a tailspin, but what does prom have to do with Michael's case? How far will Michael be able to go in his questioning before, onece again, he gets shot down?
HIGHLY anticipating the next update!! :) this was was terrific!!!
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2017 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 68
I didn't need Brian Bleach, but I did need Novotny Bleach especially after the video. Shudder.
Author's Response:
Gaah was so traumatised writing it that fingers were shaking badly...
MissMerlot
Date: Apr 11, 2017 5:28 am Title: Chapter 68
Wow just wow.