Date: Feb 23, 2020 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
love it, I found first story, somehow I was reading the sequel first. Love Michael bashing
Date: May 02, 2017 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
it has always irritated me that everyone blanketly believes anything douchebag Michael says... they automatically believe Justin is a husband stealing whore who is now using Brian to punish Mikey... Oh Emmett... I hope you learn a lesson, and this Ted is horrible... even when warned he can't even think to leave Michael's grasp.
Date: Apr 03, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
How can they all just believe Michael? And why does Ben seem to play into his hands by not denying it?
Date: Mar 12, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooooops like your warning Emmett is kind of a jerk in here but as you said in the beginning only so i guess we'll just have to wait for him to wake up from being an ass to Brian and Blake ..
Date: Mar 10, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is what I love about fanfiction. Taking a character and making them slightly different, but also keeping them within the realms of possiblity. I can totally see Emmett this way. Not mean or anything, but conflicted and easily swayed by those he considers friends and easily manipulated too. Nobody has pointed ut his, Ted's or Michael's behaviour to him because they only stick to themselves. Michael keeps everyone else at bay.
Blake was brilliant! Complete truth teller, and made Emmett question things that, till now, have seemed proper. Those who are being manipulated, in many cases, don't see it happening. Shame that Michael's influence on Ted and Emmett caused T&B's relationship to end. Will Ted see it as such or will he still be misguided?
Brian is sure in what he wants and it Justin. He's not going to take Michael's crap or Deb's either. wondering if Deb is going to be blindly backing up Michael or will she also see that Brian deserves to have a life?
Am already completely hooked and looking forward to more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's unusual for Emmett, but he went to ask Blake, instead of going to Deb or Michael. I hope he won't get worse than that.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
How refreshing this is the Emmett at the beginning of the series. And Blake certainly told him the truth. Maybe Emmett will be able to help. As for Ted, this is what he was like as well. I'm going to enjoy this particular story just as much as all your others.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Please don't let them ruin Brian's first relationship. He's making progress and evolving. Can't wait for the boys weekend with Gus.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Awesome.......micheal is such a bastard ...poor blake... cant wait for more....thank for posting.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:00 am Title: Chapter 3
What did you do to Em??? I'm just joking, he was fine in context. I just never get to complain about your stories so... Lol
OMG you have a very interesting set up, Mikey is in a relationship sabotaging everyone else and being enabled by the same. I can't believe he was sitting on the car. Someone (all of them) need to find a back bone and some smarts. Even Brian, he said the right things but he seemed to neglect finishing Mikey and making things crystal. If he wants Justin it's going to require some work.
Im loving it!!!
Date: Mar 10, 2017 8:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I like your fresh take on the ways Mikey's obsessiveness adversely affects not only B and J, but also Ted and Blake. I'm not disliking Emmett (yet?), but I enjoy seeing him conflicted. Well done!
Date: Mar 10, 2017 6:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Already sucked into this story.