Date: May 02, 2017 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Insecure Ben and his reaction at the diner now makes sense with the info from Emmett... it's a shame... I can like Ben, but not this Ben... weak and chasing Michael like he's a prize. ewww
Date: Apr 04, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww that's so cute. I love how Debbie chose wisely for once.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Last line was soooo fabulous.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
glad to see that Gus isn't fooled by Michael's games. Kids are smart. Good on him.
Good plain hard truths that Brian told Michael and in particular Ben. Ben is still being a dick mainly cause he's using again. doesn't excuse the fact that he started this whole thing by using Justin. He still hasn't come clean to Michael about it, and still makes excuses for his behavior. I like Justin's truth too. That Ben needed to make shit up to keep Michael's interest.
Deb was great sitting on the sidelines like that. I can totally visulaize her asking the diners what's what. Like that she's not taking everything from Michael as golden and has opened her eyes to him and hsi ways.
Nice day at the Zoo. Perhaps there's hope for Emmett and Ted to be brought into B&J's circle. I think Justin will still want them to prove themselves. Can't blame him.
Will Justin catch onto what Brian was saying?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Brawl at the diner. I'm glad Ted was able to get Gus out of there before he saw much.
I wish Brian would have put Ben on his ass. I don't know what he sees in Michael but those two belong together.
Look at Emmett giving love advice to Brian. Yes, please tell him and show him everyday. :) I'm loving Gus and Justin's relationship.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 11
That was hot in a not lice-affirming way: Ben is as hateful as Michael; poor Gus wo almost witness that! The end though was positive, thanks to Emmett's words to Brian!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 11
Ben was very confrontational, not to mention down right rude. Em's clearly team Justin same for Ted. Gus prefers Justin. Brian loves Justin. Sounds like a done deal.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 11
Looks like NOTHING has gone Bugs and Daffy's way, LMAO!!!! I was so PROUD of Brian for telling it like it is, Justin for knocking Michael on his ass and finally Deb for asking before automatically believing her lying ass offspring. Brian is reclaiming his life and I couldn't be happier! Also laughed out loud when Emmett told Ben the absolute truth about Michael's motive for marrying Ben and Brian asked the really important question of why Michael actually said yes to marriage. Hopefully all of the side effects of Ben's steroid use will be turned on Michael. Yeah... there is NO LOVE lost from me for the Pricks of Liberty this fic!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Let's hear it for those Diner patrons too!! WHOO-HOO!!!!! Take that Dumb and Doofus!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 2:37 am Title: Chapter 11
So Ben is back on steroids and is deluding himself hard that Michael loves needs, wants him.
I so wanted Justin to kick Michael's Ass!!! Also want Brian to kick Ben's Ass but not while he is on steroids.
What Michael and Ben fail to realize is that if Brian gives you a warning heed it because he can and will keep his word.
Well at least those two idiots didn't spoil the day for Brian, Gus and Justin.