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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:12 pm Title: The Aftermath

Yay for Justin...  and for Brian starting to having dreams and visions of his Sunshine...   I was thinking after I left my review for last chapter, what a homophobic asshole Judge Dixon was.  You just had do use that name, didn't you, as that was the name of the jerk teacher that Justin had. (lol)... Anyway, I'm glad Brian finally snapped at Mikey a little... I hope he gets enough flack from Brian that he returns to David. As you can see, I'm not a fan of dear, little Mikey.  One last comment, I really hope Brian will bring a civil suit against Hobbs, and gets a more lenient Judge, and make that insufferable prick pay.



Author's Response:

Even though Brian's conscious mind can't recall Justin, or who he was to him, his subconscious is starting to stir up memories.  Now all he needs is to recall those things while awake.  Actually, that is very observant about the judge's name.  Although I didn't base it on the teacher, it is ironic.  The name is based on a friend I had in the past who turned out to be homophobic.  Needless to say, our friendship ended, as I don't tolerate that kind of behavior.  

I understand your feelings about Mikey because many fans feel that way, but you won't find me turning him into a villain.  Nor will I send him back to David, who I always did consider bad.  But give it time.  Mikey won't stand in the way of true love.  I can promise you that.

Love the comment about the civil suit.  More on that in your next review.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 12:05 am Title: The Aftermath

 Yay! Justin is coming back. TAG



Author's Response:

Now you know I cannot keep them apart forever.  That would be a crime.  LOL!  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 8:36 pm Title: The Aftermath

Yay Justin is coming home!!! Did I read that correctly? Did he get a full scholarship to PIFA? Seems like Brian's subconscious is trying to move memories of Sunshine into his consciousness. The brain is an complicated thing. 



Author's Response:

Yes indeed, you read that correctly, Glo.  Justin is returning to the fold and it will change things profoundly for more than one person.  Justin did get a full scholarship so he is home to stay.  Brian, in the meantime, is trying to understand why he keeps having images of a young blond.  Only time will tell how much he'll remember and when.  Next chapter will be ready shortly.  Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 8:12 pm Title: The Aftermath

excellant way of getting Justin back to Pittsburgh and nicely done getting Brian thinking about a blond with blue eyes.



Author's Response:

Thank you, YumYum.  I couldn't leave the poor boy out there away from all those who love him and want to be there for him, including Brian even though he is totally unaware of it for now.  And poor Brian will continue to be haunted by a memory that keeps trying to come to the surface.   More coming very shortly.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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