Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2019 5:00 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: GIVING UP IS SO HARD TO DO…

Michael seriously doesn't see that his house of cards is not just wobbling anymore a huge earthquake is heading his way and the fallout will only be catastrophic for him and Deb who is already seeing that her world is falling apart but is refusing to admit that it is her fault.

I wish I could work up an ounce of sympathy for Deb but that shipment has been delayed because I don't care what happens to her anymore, like Michael She has coasted on Brian's popularity and money for way too long while using everyone to cater to Michael and her demands, it is time they both learn that Payback isn't just a Bitch but she is a Queen who is going to serve them both royally exactly what they deserve.

Yuri should be cowering in the corner somewhere sucking his thumb or else he should be leaving the island or reprimanded to kitchen duty under close supervision until Everyone has left the island.

Tino and Darius should for in a fiery plane crash but no point killing the innocent to punish them so perhaps transporting drugs could see them put away for life and punished in prison where they belong.

Michael isn't crazy he is just controlling, lazy, greedy and very entitled and that means he will never win cause yes he does have a brain but he was born without a heart or compassion for anyone besides himself.

He loves and hates Brian for being everything he isn't but he believes that without Brian around he is invisible and easily forgotten (Hello Deb!), He also hates Justin to the point of wishing him dead cause Justin really is the other half to Brian's heart and soul a position Michael could never fill because Brian doesn't settle mediocrity.

Neither does Emmett and Ted which also pisses him off everyone else achieved greatness by fighting and working for it, Michael just expects it because he is standing next to them and that is why he will always be miles behind.

Even Ben is was above Michael but he got blinded for awhile and now that he is free he is never settling for mediocre again.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!😀

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2019 7:59 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: GIVING UP IS SO HARD TO DO…

Wow,  you can really write Michael as the nasty, conniving rat that he is.  Never did like him and now I can really hate him.  Terrific chapter and wonderful writing.  

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2019 5:02 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: GIVING UP IS SO HARD TO DO…

Okay, while reading the first part, I wanted to strangle the person responsibe for writing such filth... can't be a loosy-goosy for Brian. I've been watching porn... *Shudder... Shudder*

Okay, now I have the giggles... scratch that, I'm laughing hysterically... so bad it's hard to type.

Okay, five deep breaths later...

SOMEBODY better be at the plane to meet Tino and Darius... like the frickin police or FBI! I'm certain they will have copius amounts of Meth on them, with plans to take a hold of Blake, and possibly Ted and Emmett. They aren't going to play nice by Michael's rules and just get Blake!

Michael is a nut job! Of the worst kind! MY HOUSE!  MY BRIAN!! God, please find a padded cell for him. As for Debbie, I KNOW I should feel a little sympathy for her, but you know what???  I DON"T HAVE A SYMPATHETIC BONE IN MY BODY FOR THAT WOMAN!! The old saying: "you reap what you sow" ... that's right Deb ... live with your mistakes!!! You were told time and again... WARNED time and again... Nope, you and Michael can live on the streets for all I care. And as for Michael playing nice to Ben... good luck! That ship has SAILED!!!!

Ooh... now you have left me riled up!!! If that is what you were hoping for, you accomplished it in spades! But anyway, thanks for the update!!!

Still luv ya,

HUGS  ~Cathy ❤️