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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 6:10 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

Whoa! Zen Ben is finally awake and kicking! Good for him!

I loved the "unicycle of unparalleled selfishness"; excellent!

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 4:57 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

You are Amazing! So fast. sending *hugs💗

Love every moment. Ben reaming michel another one. Him looking in mirror, feeling free. Ben deserves better than Micheal. Don't know how Debbie will react? aside from blaming others rather herself & her 35 years old infant. "Like Mother Deb, Like moron Micheal." Screeching, whining together.

Thankyou for Wonderful update.🙂



Author's Response:

Thanks so MUCH! I'm glad that you are continuing to enjoy the story! There will certainly be MUCH screeching and whining for them to do in the coming days.

~Nichelle

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 2:04 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

Wonderul scene between Michael and Ben and so happy that Ben kicked Michael to the curb.  so happy to see everyone finally realizing how manipulative Michael actually is.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Sandy! This continues to be an amazing experience to write. 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 1:55 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

Oh Yes! Another Update! You are on FIRE!!! Please don't get doused!

You Go Benjamin Bruckner. Keep looking at the handsome mug and physique of yours! I really do hope during your last book: MOVING ON-One Year Later, that Ben is in a wonderful relationship with a super HOT STUD!  (Brian's taken... but plenty of men in the sea of bodies.) hehe... Take That Michael. Ben deserves it for all the horrendous years he has put up with Michael.

Michael... Michael... Didn't he specifically say in the last chapter he had to fix things with Ben? You don't scream at someone the minute they open the door, shaking papers at them, while trying to hit them with them. WRONG FIRST IMPRESSION!!! Did he think he could bully him into submission? I see when that did not work, he tried the innocent boy routine.. sorry Michael. And do heed Ben's warning... EVERYBODY IS FED UP WITH YOU!!! AND YOUR MA!!!

Speaking of Deb, if she has a mountain of boxes... hmm... if it's ONLY supposed to be what Michael came into the marriage with... should there be that much? I hope that there where specific instructions on what all to pack. I hope he wasn't holding a storage facility anyplace. At least if there was anything hidden within safes or anything in the store... that should be discovered. I take for granted that Michael had a list drawn up what was his when they got married?  you were actually quite meticulous when detailing every single fucking one of those toys... Now what will Michael do?

Oh! I wanted to ask you... I can't remember the guys name right off... but someone was going to be watching Michael... (this was the counselors talking right after they got on the island.) Who was the guy supposed to be? Just someone who worked for them? Security? Was it the big dude that delivered his papers to him? And if this guy is watching him... how was he able to get Yuri to deliver the message? I thought of all this last night after reading your other update.

Keep Writing! Loving It!!

Cathy ❤️

 



Author's Response:

Hey Cathy! You're going to have to wait for the answers to your questions, but I will tell you that Ellis was instructed to watch and inform, not intercept. We'll be hearing more about his role in things a little later on. I'm so glad that you are continuing to enjoy this story!

~Nichelle

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 1:42 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

Great chapter.  Love that Ben stood up to stupid.  I always liked Ben and really didn't like that he was stuck with Michael in the series, but it was a good storyline.    So happy that you are doing so many updates on this story.  You know how much I love it and your writing.  Fantastic.



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks Darling! 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2019 11:43 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

How many more chapters of this story till it's finished 



Author's Response:

Hello Amy,

 

Currently, Book I is finished, and Book II is still in progress. They will be followed by two more Books, all written within this one fanfic. That said, I'm really not sure yet. I don't write/ outline like most other authors do beyond a pretty primitive premise. This allows for much of the story to occur organically, as if you're watching real life happen, or living it through the eyes of the characters themselves. It's the same type of format I follow with all of my other work as well. If you'd like, you can certainly start on Book I and read straight through to where we are in the story now. I'm pretty certain that by the time you visit the last posted chapter, there will be more of the story posted.

Thanks so much for your inquiry. It means more than words can say! 

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2019 11:38 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

Hello Benjamin James Bruckner Welcome To The First Official Day Of The Rest Your Life!!

Ben served Michael before Michael could serve him (Or Poison Him, AHole Coward!!) so Ben owns the store legally and now all Michael's toys would look good on display at auction for some True Collectors to buy and cherish on the internet so Michael can watch as they all slip through his fingers one by one.

Did Ben's lawyer happen to find a hidden bank account with Michael (Barf!) Kinney on it?

I don't want Michael to even have lint in his pockets so like the Count of Monte Cristo said "Take It All" but do leave him his spider man underwear cause no one would want that and his clothes would look good in a fire pit😄

Yes Ben sees Michael for what he really is and that lesson is one he will never forget and it will teach him to look beyond the cover to find out what the full story is.

Is there any thing in the mountain of boxes at Deb's that could be used to further seal Michael's fate?

The House is shaking hard Michael and you will be buried under the rumble where you belong😆

Thanks For the Update 😃



Author's Response:

All I can say is that you know me soooooo VERY well, Blue!

Love and HUGS,

 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2019 11:36 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

I have to admit to checking several times a day for an update on this story.  I am so looking forward to Mikey and Deb being cut lose.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Hey Phyllis! I find myself just as engrossed as you are. And I'm on tenterhooks about how this all plays out just as much! Deb is going to remain the wildcard for awhile yet, considering that everyone else is cutting Michael loose. It's going to be interesting to see what happens when she has to really pay attention to who and what Michael really is. Will she see the similarities between the two of them? Or will she continue to overlook the obvious in favor of companionship, even if it's from the brat she birthed over thirty years ago? Hmmm, questions, questions, and more questions!

~Nichelle

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