Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 6:35 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: EVERYBODY PLAYS THE FOOL

Ben is really getting his life in order and considering the past events may help coping with his guilt.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2019 4:23 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: EVERYBODY PLAYS THE FOOL

You are a beautiful writer.

I agreed with every analysis points.

Micheal character was never an ideal type as Qaf writers tried. He always was an immature & needy, totally clingy. Ben loved him, still Ben has to stoop low to be with him. Can't be said same for Michel.

Hope the guys clipped his mouth, so his Screeching get shut. Let Michel keep fuming. Did he hear about Yuri having his pea balls ripped out by Sunshine.

Loving your stories. More please. Hugs ❤

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 8:02 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: EVERYBODY PLAYS THE FOOL

Wonderful, just wonderful.  I see the path that these chapters are taking and I feel like a puzzle is being completed.  Each one tells the how and why of what Michael has done and it is fantastic.  You, my friend, are so talented.  To be writing one story is amazing, but to have others plus ideas is incredible.  Fantastic writing as always.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 6:46 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: EVERYBODY PLAYS THE FOOL

OMGAWD!!!

Everything Ben said about Michael and Deb is so accurate and just proves how selfish and self-centered they both are to everyone around them.

They are extremely happy when their puppets are dancing to their tune but the second one of them tries to snip their strings then they bully them back into suppression and all is right once again.

Michael needs his mommy until she is of no further use than she is an Embarrassing, Moronic, Waste of his Time.

Deb is like that with Michael one second he is more precious than gold until his demands get in the way of her happiness Then he is an Asshole, Little Shit, Brat.

They all fell for Michael and Deb's machinations because they really didn't want to believe that the people who accepted and loved them were actually disgusting soul-sucking demons.

The Little Mermaid reference is quite accurate.

When Deb and Michael look in the mirror they are their vileness but ignore it for the reflection they believe they are which is of two loving people who are accepting and honest to the people they allowed into their lives.

While Justin, Blake and Drew see their true selves that no amount of fake niceness can hide and that is why Deb and especially Michael want to gone or submitting like everyone else.

Brian, Emmett and Ted were blind because they found acceptance while ignoring the conditions placed on them by two selfish people who really don't love anyone including themselves.

Love is a word they can say but never understood the concept without asking first "What's In It For Me?".

That is why they will Never be Happy!

 I Once Was Blind But Now I See

Thanks For the Update 😃