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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2018 11:24 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

Chapters 43-45: Holy heavens! Unholy fucking hell! How on earth did you come up with that! LOL... well, it sounds like Michael is in deep trouble! How is it that he had Brian's phone the day he started in about going to P-Town, so that Brian didn't get that call from Remson? Boy, is he gonna be royally pissed when he hears that message from Justin about Remson. And, if the guys tried calling their partners, why couldn't they see the missed texts and calls? Did he replace their phones or something? WIS?? Funny!  Brian commented that he should feel some symphathy for his best friend for losing the comic. Well, all Michael has to do is get a new illustrator and start a new comic, seeing the genius he is! So, stop it Brian! Boy, Brian had a messed up sexual experiences from an early age. Not good! no wonder he used to perceive sex the way he did. I wish he'd have had thought processes reading some of those text messages. Wow! Justin's POV was really something to take in. So why, if Michael had said that crap to Justin before, what made him snap this time, and take matters into his own hands? B/J really have a lot to plow through.  Pseudo-Doc?  Seriously?  Ben had some heavy stuff to unload, too.  He really has some issues to face. First with Michael's message and not showing up... then all these missed messages. If I were Ben, I'd bring that note he left for the doc, and tell him if he doesn't seriously put forth an effort to work on their relationship, he can drop the BRUCKNER!

Reviewer: kerri240879 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2018 9:56 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

I love this story. I want to seriously smack the ever-loving shit out of Michael, but I love this story!! Thanks for such a wonderful tale. Looking forward to more. Cheers; Kerri. x

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 9:27 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

The beginning with Michael's message to the doc is quite funny, but I feel so bad for Ben.

What a fool he has been; after what happened with Paul, he trusted Michael, and once again was treated like second choice and let Michael do it.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 3:37 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

Michael is a piece of shit and I can't wait for Ben & everyone else to tell him to fuck off! That is all.....

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:40 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

So Ben is responsible for not reigning in Michael.  But will finding out how manipulative Micheal is make a difference?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:12 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

Ben is starting to realize when you settle for an illusion all you get is crap back.

Michael is stuck at fourteen when it was just him and Brain it is his happy place and he will do anything to stay there.

Everyone else is just granted the privilege to be apart of his inner circle but they must abide by the rules which is He Is THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSON YOU WILL EVER MEET & HIS HAPPINESS IS THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS!!!

He may have the maturity level of a fourteen year old but he has the brain span of a two year old when he doesn't get his way.

I think he resents Brian not only because Brian never chose him but because Brian became successful and was starting to leave him behind.

He used Rage and Justin to gain success but everyone was still leaving him behind.

Justin may have been seventeen  and naive when he walked onto Liberty Avenue but he was still more of a man than Michael and it was another thing he resented Justin for, cause no one had to hold his hand, tell him he was gay and get him laid.         

Justin Got Brian His First Night and all Michael got was an unfinished hand job.

Ben is taking his power back.

By The end of this almost Everyone will have their power back :)           

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:12 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2

Good chapter.  As much as I really dislike Michael.  I have constantly questioned why Brian, Ben, Ted & Emmett have let him do the things that he does.  I like seeing that you are addressing that.  Great job.

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