Date: Dec 06, 2018 2:20 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
Love it, please update
Date: Nov 08, 2018 3:43 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
oh my. Such treachery on the Novotnys side, but we knew that. So glad that all the couples are working on being together again. I hope Michael is corraled before he can throw another monkey wrench into all the couples lives. I love the idea of Ben writing and making his own company. So glad you updated this story.
Date: Nov 08, 2018 3:05 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
Ooh... I feel special. Two chapters in one day! Thank you so much for that.
Can I have the pleasure of castrating Michael? I remember reading a story once where the author was having this person telling Michael all the different ways she castrated cows when she was younger on her farm. Some of them were pretty gruesome. I could go back and find the one that sounds the most painful, and fully execute it. Though I've never been a farmer, determination to rid a malevolent person of said balls, I think I could find immense pleasure in doing the deed.
So that answered my question of why Michael was in LeMont's and all my subsequent questions of what went on there, but I'm not sure if the questions Blake asked, were actually answered. What was Melanie doing there? And why did you all have that reaction in reference to her being at the restaurant?
Why didn't Brian and Mel check with the hospital and Lindsay's doctors as to how Michael learned what was in Lindsay's medical records? If the doctors realized the cause of their patients condition, they certainly would have had an investigation ongoing at the clinic/hospital. I was actually wondering if Gus had died when you stated Lindsay suffered from toxemia and unknown stress disorder, and Brian swallowed his own tears and left Lindsay and Mel alone so they could grieve for their lost dream. But at the time, Melanie just mused on the fact that Gus was near stillborn. But the rest of it, lead me to believe he didn't make it.
And what the hell? A SAFETY NET???? Michael? After all the cruel and sadistic things he said and did, NOBODY is worth staying friends with someone like that. Especially allowing them to drive your partner, whom you love, away. Under no circumstance can I atone Brian staying friends with him. Deb or No Deb... Nope, not worth it. Brian had Ted, Emmett and Justin. He DID NOT need Debbie.
Btw, is Lindsay still alive? I'm only asking because Brian said the anxiety disorder she has, and she figured she was going to die.
Melanie must have had a real heart-to-heart with all the counsellors, as none of them appeared surprised by what everyone was talking about.
Absolutely loved this chapter. You gave us a lot to contemplate about.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Nov 08, 2018 2:08 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
Wow, Michael really was and still is a shit.
While they're meeting and filling everyone in on the true Devil himself, what is said Devil doing? Is he getting his minions together? Ethan's on the island. Who else? Did he get a hold of Chris Hobbs? How many of Blake's, his old dealer, Justin's, Drew's, snd even Ben's skeletons out of the closet to get them running away?
Did Lindsay, Mel, and Brian ever discuss having another child together?
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2018 11:29 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
The second Deb saw Brian as the perfect scapegoat for Michael then the others who came later she lost the right to call any of them The Sons of Her Heart.
Michael is one smart A-Hole when it comes to getting what he wants and hurting others.
They can't hold onto the crutch known as Debra Jane Novotny anymore cause if she was given the choice to save Michael or one of her lost boys, she would mow them down to protect her baby.
Now Michael would mow his own mother down if it meant everyone would focus on him.
An innocent child died because Michael didn't want his favorite toy focus on someone else.
Deb taught Michael well and now he...they need to understand that once the ties are severed not even God himself can mend it.
They will be expecting anger, silent treatment then after a week or two all is forgiven and the status quo remains the same.
Melanie is giving Brian, Ted and Emmett a chance to see Michael and Deb for who they really are, and to stop letting them yank on the chain they were shackled with for being allowed near Michael.
Blake, Drew and Justin could see through Michael's machinations because they refused to bow under Deb's bullying or Michael's whining.
Now that eyes are being opened and ears are finally hearing then the talk everyone needs to have with their partners she be very interesting.
Love Getting Another Update :)
Date: Nov 07, 2018 8:55 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
Whoa! That's a huge horrible information about Gus and Lindsay.
I'm not sure I understand their reaction about Mel being in the restaurant. Maybe I should read that part again at the beginning of this story.
Date: Nov 07, 2018 8:31 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING
Wow, another fantastic chapter. You really threw a curve announcing that Gus had died. Wonderful story. Terrific writing.