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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2019 2:08 am Title: Chapter 3

Brian is still having trouble with the holidays in spite of Lindsay's trying to improve it.  Perhaps if they did something totally different?



Author's Response: I think Brian will always have demons on some level, due to the nature of his childhood -- but I think the time spent with their group in Toronto will improve things for him. Don't worry -- we're suckers for a happy ending ;) Thanks, as always, for reading, and your comments! -PTW

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2019 12:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  It's fun reading a Christmas story in the summer.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! We were too excited to wait til it was seasonally appropriate! ;) -PTW

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2019 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Brian is so moody that I hope he will get better during the next days.

Mel seems to have no ulterior motive(s).

If Lindsay tones it down a little, the week should be lighter and enjoyable for the family.



Author's Response: Brian wasn't in a bad mood, just the holidays are a little rough for him. This chapter's incident left him feeling strangely pleasant in a way he wasn't expecting. Linds will be Linds, haha, but she won't impede (most of) their visit ;) Thanks, as always, for your comment! -PTW

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