[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2019 9:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Already late But One way or another it was going to happen. Hope Brian better listen to Justin. There are clues in those thoughts Justin heard of culprits (maybe their more than 2 people). You written fantastic.
I like Daphne knows it. She understand & supported Justin, as Michel never did to Brian.
Thankyou for update. kudos. :)
Date: Sep 24, 2019 7:26 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Omg Tag I was shouting at the chapter to Justin shut up and go and tell Brian! And when he does Gus is already gone 😔
Date: Sep 24, 2019 12:42 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
OK, so I think I've narrowed down my own list of suspects.
I really love that Justin can so completely trust Daphne... we all need friends like that!
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Okay... heart-stopping chapter. Do you want guesses on who we think the kidnapper is? Well, even if you don't... I have to talk...
My first question is: Were you trying to throw us off the path by continually referring to the kidnapper as 'he' 'him'?
Because... this time all he saw was a darkened room, a beat up kitchen table covered with piles of paperwork and bills, and a highball tumbler sitting next to a bottle of cranberry juice and a box of cheap white wine ... the scene in his head showed hands throwing a pile of bills across the table. ‘I’m fucking drowning here while HE wastes more money in one night than I earn in a week. And what’s worse, that brat of his gets treated like a damned prince while he ignores the rest of us. Maybe if the brat wasn’t around, he’d be a little looser with his cash...
This is telling me CLAIRE! But then you have DINER scenes... unless Michael is helping Claire... because I don't see Claire sitting in the diner with all those 'sinners'.
You are weaving quite the tale here. I'm thoroughly hooked. Mysteries... I LOVE MYSTERIES!!! BRAVO! TEN STARS! (Should be a hundred!)
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Sep 23, 2019 8:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Good cliffhanger.
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 3:52 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Drums' roll!!! I have one name in my head: Michael, who isn't getting much attention since Gus is born.
Author's Response:
I love listening to everyone’s guesses... TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 3:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Love this chapter. More clues and a chance to save Gus!
Author's Response:
I love doling our clues like this. It’s so fun for me as a writer... TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 2:06 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
WONDERFUL WORDS FROM THE MASTER !!!!!! Absolutely fantastic.
Author's Response:
Awww! Thank you! Keep on writing! TAG