Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2019 6:26 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Great beginning! Justin going to a trip with Brian could be a life changing event.

I bet that Justin appreciated his birthday gift on his 18th! I don't think Brian could have come with a better one.

I can only imagine this scene: "begin singing YMCA at the top of my lungs while swinging from the fucking chandelier", then Melanie's look of horror or envy to this one "the upclose and personal view of my dick".

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2019 2:55 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Where do I start? WOW! You grouped me - little 'ol ME - with Deb Tanner! Can I kiss you? I was so happy to see this one! And, can't wait to see which others will be chosen. (and - ooh - I have a couple others I was wondering about posting... which one of them just might work with 'Retrograde' :)

Anyway... imagine when I checked my spam folder today before deleting it... and found THIS in there... I raced right over.

I LOVE the idea of this being current day... marriage is probably legal.

I loved your characterizations of Michael, Lindsay, and Deb. Demanding. June Cleaver. Taking care of widdle Mikey! You sure had all of them pegged! But, am I sorry Michael is in Portland? Hell NO! But, he will probably be back for the wedding and put his two-cents worth in about Justin going to the White Parties.

I could definitely see Brian and Justin working together... they both are career-driven and smart. Is Brian still supposed to be with Ryder or has Vangard taken over?  But, maybe they should start Kinnetik... because if they are off to another state... what about Gus?

Thankfully it was Mel and NOT Lindsay barging in... but seriously... how can Melanie have any illusions of Justin being INNOCENT... when he's been hooked up with Brian for a year? (Sorry... that just really hit me funny!)

So,  btw... If anyone gives you heck about starting a new story... send them to me. What they may not realize is that when you have multiple stories going... you have the option to write on the one that you have ideas on how to go forward. And, I for one, never mind going back and rereading a small portion to get back into the groove. And hey... Look on the bright side folks... we are STILL being highly entertained here!

HUGS  ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2019 4:32 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Woo Hoo! I'm dangerous! LOL! The last time anyone referred to me as dangerous was my kids whenever I was in the kitchen! I love it and can't wait to see which bunnies inspired you!

I am loving this fic. Brian and Justin are so much more intune with each other yet still working things out. What's really great is that they are doing all that together.

Mel barging in was a surprise. But it was a good surprise! So glad it wasn't Michael! I laughed out loud when she rushed out of the loft so she could preserve her image of Sunshine's innocence.

I think this is going to be another wonderful fic!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: smoxen Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2019 12:42 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Great start! I’m excited to see where this goes. I do think Brian and Justin are stifled in the Pitts so I love the idea of them getting out.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 7:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Lol that was awesome and I loved Justin being nervous at first on how to manage his future prospects and keep a hand on the KOM! Then as they talked things over Brian and Justin realised how strong they are. However as they knew when the work together they can manage anything 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 8:00 am Title: CHAPTER 1

 I really like this beginning that mixes part of the series and twists it for your vision of what could have happened. But I can not wait to see how Justin and Brian got married, but I guess that's the whole story. Thank you for this new story even if there are others but you are right it is you who decide following your inspiration and I will always be there to read all that you can give. Thank you.