Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2025 11:37 am Title: Chapter 13

You did well inserting the 513 conversation into this chapter. Especially the "prince." I wonder if your thought process for this story, came from that word?

When Brian first asked them to come to Pittsburgh and to trust him, I toyed with the idea of Britin then, so this was nice to see. I hope Daphne and Lizzie come too. Just think of all the room Lizzie would have to play! The pool would have to be gated, though.

Good thing Daphne worked with Brian to get this situation worked out. I'm still a little confused as to why the paper is printing that Justin and Daphne are getting a divorce, and custody issues? Or is this orders from the Queen? Have they even talked?

Hugs ~Cathy

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2022 11:27 am Title: Chapter 13

Hey! I finally started watching the 4th season of "The Handmaid's Tale" a few days ago and what can I say.... I can't stop and it's so nice not to have to wait a week for the next episode.... ;-) But... Two things... 1. Where are Brian and Justin? Haha During the first two episodes I constantly had this strong need to see them. And you're to blame (don't take me too seriously), because the last time I dealt with Gilead was while reading your story. 2. Well, I thought Elisabeth Moss was terrible in the first seasons, but for me it's getting nearly unbearable. These eternally long camera shots on her face, her slightly cross-eyed look, oh, her whole facial expression annoys me so unspeakably... If I didn't find the series so good in itself....

But now to your chapter. Wow! What an absolutely beautiful chapter. "It's for my prince" You give this whole scene a whole new meaning. And how fitting! Did the idea for this story come to you while watching this scene or did you have the idea for this story first and then thought this scene would fit in? And actually so much nicer that it's not about a stupid wedding, but first about a real relationship. Imo, that also would have been so much better for Brian and Justin in QAF, but whatever. But after I read it, I had to make sure that this wasn't the last chapter. It felt a little bit like it. And I was happy and felt relieved that it still goes on. Looking forward to Sunday! Warmest regards!

Author's Response:

Haha, I just started on the fifth season on Friday. Amazon Prime here uploaded the first episode :) 

Personally, I don't really mind Elizabeth Moss too much. I think her acting is pretty decent on the show, but yeah, I know what you mean about those shots. Some of those choices are...questionable ;) 

I am glad that you liked the use of that line. It just seemed too perfect not to use ;) I had the idea for the story first and when I was writing it, I remembered Brian's line "for my prince" which I always found incredibly weird...He had never called Justin prince before and it was the only time and completely out of the blue and I wasn't a fan of that particular pet name, but in this case it fit perfectly, so I thought: Why not? ;) 

This isn't the last chapter by far. There is still a lot more to come :)

As always, thanks for your comment, More will be up later today! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2022 8:42 am Title: Chapter 13

 

 

 

wonderful, just wonderful

Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

More will be up later today!

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2022 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

Love that you used the for you prince line…can’t wait for more.

Author's Response:

It just seemed to fit so perfectly ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today!