Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2025 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 6

I assume the rest of the family were all aware of James. I have to wonder if the family had a chance to meet him and his kids. How long has Brian lived in LA?

Did Mel move out of Canada? Curious since Michael moved to be closer to them. The girls splitting up was not a shock to me. I always thought the move to Canada was one of Cowlips screw-ups. As miserable as they were before, that was a poor excuse to pick up and move. It was like the same scenario that Justin thought Brian was proposing marriage because of the bomb.

Just hearing Brian talking, you did a marvelous job of making him sound like he has really grown up. Maybe it was getting the guy away from Babylon, that helped.

Hugs ~Cathy

P.S. Would you put your paragraphs one line shorter? I'm copying your stories, and it plays havoc with my spacing. Thank you! ;)

Author's Response: Yes, they are aware of James, and Brian has lived in LA for eight years. No, Melanie still lives in Canada, she stayed with Brian for a while after she and Lindsay broke up, but she eventually returned to Canada. Yeah, that storyline was pretty strange, I agree with that. Thank you, I'm glad you think so! Oh yeah, I will try!