Date: Jun 08, 2025 1:38 am Title: Chapter 102: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 18: THE UNTANGLING OF ENTANGLEMENTS Part 2: MEGALOMANIACS ‘R US
Thanks for all the updates, these 3 stories are my favorites. I need to reread a few chapters of this one because with all these characters I don't know who is who anymore. But it's a treat to dive back into it. I hope that now you have successfully completed your diploma and with real life you will be able to update regularly. Warmest regards, Marie-France
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2025 7:07 am Title: Chapter 102: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 18: THE UNTANGLING OF ENTANGLEMENTS Part 2: MEGALOMANIACS ‘R US
My, my... what an intricately woven storyline.
A couple of chapters back, you mentioned that Jason Kemp's murder happened not too long after Sap's party. Do you suppose Reichert could have been at Sap's party? Maybe he's not dead (and Stockwell knows) but shipped over to a different country, handling some business for Sap. But if he was involved with Sap, he could have headed off the police for him. ~ Why am I talking about this? :D
So, THEY had foreknowledge of the reasons why Christian had for disappearing. I can't imagine how long the list of people is. And from all walks of life. Lord only knows how you are going to untangle this mess and who you will be bringing in, and with what charges?
So Justin had info before he met Brian. Would that have started with Christian in high school, and what happened to him? Would Uncle Charles maybe have told him some things?
You know, you are dragging Michael further into this complex situation, that is if Deidre thinks she can find answers in his house.
After finishing reading the chapter, I sat for at least ten minutes trying to figure out where the REAL money came from behind the operation. Are you going to introduce a new character, or combine some that we already know? I would think it would be the latter, but my poor brain can't figure it out. This is just as good as a Mary Higgens Clark novel. She gives you so many different scenarios, just like you're doing.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Hey... the last four sentences of this chapter have a spacing error, or something like that.