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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2025 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 12

If Justin didn't have any lingering tenderness in his nether regions, he can be sure he didn't get any the night before.

Does Justin not drink much anymore? That would make the hangover that much worse. I really feel bad for him with the whole throwing-up thing.

I'm really happy Justin put the brakes on there at the end. Good for him. The absolutely worst thing they could have done was fall into bed. Good for you for writing it like that.

Maybe it's that we're not hearing Brian's POV, so we don;t know what's going through his mind. Brian might have been stunned, but he certainly wasn't pushing for anything, either.

That's so much for the update.

HUGS ~Cathy



Author's Response: Yeah, Justin doesn't drink much anymore - so yes, that hangover must have really sucked. I was actually tempted to at least let them kiss and had to really control myself not to. In the end, though, I'm glad I ended the chapter the way I did. So I'm really glad you liked it :) Yes, for now there's a reason why the chapters aren't from Brian's POV, but that will surely change soon. Anyway, thank you so much for the comment! ????

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2025 8:43 am Title: Chapter 12

I'm gonna have to come back to this one. I'm kind of confused, so I need to read soem of the past chapters.

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