Date: Dec 31, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.
It felt authentic to me!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.
Poor Justin he's so hurt and confused. He's full of contradictions of need and worthlessness. I pray that Brian can get through his defenses. The streets are no place for him as he tries to heal from his childhood.
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Sep 04, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.
I think we are getting close to what kind of abusive father Craig is and I guess he's / was so much worse than Jack.
It's awful what people can do in the name of religious beliefs towards anybody, but when it's in the family's core, it's worse because of the trust that is repeatedly destroyed, until there is no more.
Gus is the vector that could go through Justin, because he's a kid and doesn't mean to do wrong on purpose.
The whole situation is difficult for Brian because he wants to help and doesn't know how to do it. The fact that Justin doesn't seem attracted to him must also be hard (no pun intended for once, my mind is not at all focused on that in this story) on him; he really isn't used to that.
I don't think the characters are OOC or too OOC; Brian has shown in the series that he can restrain himself (beginning of S2) and be there for Justin. In your story, he feels that Justin needs to be rescued and not only from the cold and malnutrition. He knows Justin is troubled (nightmares, empty look, fear ...).
Date: Aug 31, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.
I hope Brian can help him. I should go to bed now but I need to know what happens next.
Author's Response:
I know the feeling - you're wide awake at 1 am and you know you need to get some sleep but you just can't stop reading some fanfic . . . LOL. Glad you're enjoying this story. TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.
Don't let go Brian... stay strong and stay persistent